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Nov 27, 2004 23:06

Guess what?! i have not only one. but two new poems to share with you. o well here it goes

Looking back at memmories
of blood stained shirts and sharp metal toys.
A nice glide of verticle.
The nights of pain
and stolen dreams.
Those senseless kisses
and huggs of lies.
The selfish tears
and overrated apologies.
Beauty bleeds too...That hoax of ( Read more... )

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ever_s0_sweett November 28 2004, 04:29:09 UTC
me like.

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_xlovefailsx_ November 28 2004, 13:15:40 UTC
brittni is a poetic genuissss

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anonymous November 28 2004, 21:44:07 UTC
youve never had your heart broken before.

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anonymous November 28 2004, 21:48:07 UTC
so shut the fuck up. stop wishing you were emo or something just because you want to be some big hot shot or something where people feel bad for you. how about you write a poem about something youve actually exierece. this cutting shit and your "broken heart" bullshit

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_xlovefailsx_ November 28 2004, 22:20:49 UTC
um..please go choke and die if you seriously want to say mean things to brittni or anything about her first please state your name instead of being a queer and second please expect that you're going to be yelled at..don't go writing things in other peoples livejournals just so it makes you feel better about yourself by making fun of other people..do the world a favor and jump off a cliff and die.

thank you. goodbye.

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xxfailedxlovexx November 29 2004, 01:20:26 UTC
omg lauren. i just noticed something. you sounded exactly like.... ME. you really are like turning into me.. thats not good.stop.

peace<3

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anonymous November 29 2004, 22:22:19 UTC
im sorry.i missed you.i cant wait to SEE you.i love you.on~n~on.even thoguh i dont really write you dont have to worry because theres not one of these that i havnt read.i loveyou so. sorry.<33van

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love you<3 xxfailedxlovexx November 30 2004, 00:17:51 UTC
mmhmm. i love you too and im sorry<3<3<3

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Re: love you<3 anonymous November 30 2004, 00:25:18 UTC
aw brit ur so cute...i love the poems babe ! missed ya in school ha
- laurennn

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sorry... anonymous November 30 2004, 00:39:15 UTC
hey um this is awkward but i was the one who wrote in your lj before when you were like screw the last entry....
and i was a real bitch
i just want to say im sorry
because that happened to me on my lj and the person didnt even know me
so i feel horrible because i was just believing rumors about you
if i were you id prolly think this was one of your friends trying to make you feel better... but i swear, its not
i dont think ive ever even talked to you
so im sorry
and i feel horrible
what made me respect you was your last few entrys, they made me feel better about the anons that were being mean to me, and i wanted you to know they helped a lot
so im sorry, and i feel horrible
Sincerely,
me
p.s. your poems are beautiful

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Re: sorry... anonymous November 30 2004, 01:59:38 UTC
aww people love you brittni !@! thats cute for that person saying sorry,

<3 ya
lauren

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Re: sorry... xxfailedxlovexx November 30 2004, 02:09:24 UTC
its okay but if you could tell me your name that would be greatly appreciated. that would help me realize what im doing wrong.

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