Designer Airplane Graveyard

Dec 15, 2007 20:07


Designer Airplane Graveyard

Designer airplane crash, the burn carves through this airtight winter chill,
Kite flyers motionless and unfaltering in their demand of youth.
Take-offs from flat surfaces gain acceptance upon recognition of innocence.

A cemetary decorated with wings cater as a parting way for stars and sapphires,
Black holes become dilated ( Read more... )

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anonymous December 16 2007, 05:07:28 UTC
startling imagery and effective use of alliteration -- very nice.

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anonymous December 16 2007, 05:18:32 UTC
i didn't get it at first but it really is awesome

--elisa

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anonymous December 16 2007, 05:47:05 UTC
wow theres not much i can really say the picture you draw is outstanding im speachless wow

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anonymous December 16 2007, 06:14:02 UTC
WOW... That's got some great imagery in it. I don't really know what else to say other then that. *kinda speechless*

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anonymous December 16 2007, 07:09:13 UTC
This is absolutly beautiful!!
you are definatly a great poet my dear!!
i definatly will have to read more of your stuff!!
-krissy

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