The Decade Of Southern Rampage

Jun 23, 2008 02:33


The Decade Of Southern Rampage

and he said..."theres a country i love on the borders of nowhere.
Somewhere lucid and whole-hearted."

The rivers,
flow eerily close and rampage the southern sun
to the dismay of valleys and plains.

The seagulls,
wedge there intuition upon the saltiest rocks
that this body has forged over decades.

These flats,
recreate the ( Read more... )

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Nature anonymous June 26 2008, 00:41:52 UTC
This poem reminded me of what I love seeing: nature being nature. It shows evolution at work, but in a way in which many people don't pay attention to. You've looked at the adaptations and changes nature makes in the way of time and outside forces. I very much like this; it's very reflective(I see this even more from hearing how you wrote this) and full of imagery.

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