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adammlambert3 June 28 2009, 06:50:35 UTC
This fic is very good. Thanks for posting.

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xxkatiekatiex June 28 2009, 06:55:03 UTC
Thank you so much! I was afraid that the current tense was going to make it a little too choppy, but I think choppy kind of works for this one.

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claire_kay June 28 2009, 09:36:07 UTC
fuhngg.
wow. that was amazing, I love the idea of made up Kris hanging out with Adam. and jealous!Kris was just perfect too.
Beautifully written hun, I do hope you decide to write more, thank you for sharing x

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marjorie2009 June 28 2009, 12:49:39 UTC
I like this. Do you plan to expand the storyline? It would be nice to see how kris and adam will evolve given the slow realization of how they feel about each other. Can't wait for you next post.

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aeris1172 June 28 2009, 17:00:24 UTC
Basically, I hate fics without dialogue, right? Right.

But I really loved this. IT was well written and flowed really smoothly. The thought of Kris with eyeliner makes me giggle. I hope to see more Kradam from you, because you're an excellent writer! :)

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aeris1172 June 28 2009, 17:02:00 UTC
OMG OMG DNW DNW I'M SO STUPID THERE IS DIALOGUE IGNORE ME

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xxkatiekatiex June 28 2009, 17:09:32 UTC
IT'S ONLY THREE LINES, EASY TO MISS, BB.

As a rule, I love writing dialogue, and I'm pretty good at it. This piece was weird for me in that sense.

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