Fic: Even Storm Clouds Tire of Rain

Aug 27, 2010 18:09

Title: Even Storm Clouds Tire of Rain
Author: xxkaytayxx 
Rating: PG-13
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Spoilers: Takes place after Season Five. References to 5.22.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 9462
Summary: Dean’s barely functioning after the loss of Sam, but Castiel starts visiting in his dreams to bring Dean back to somewhere close to okay. It takes fighting, ( Read more... )

fanfiction: supernatural, fanfiction: dean/castiel

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landrews August 28 2010, 01:22:33 UTC
I really enjoyed this- it's thoughtful and textured and the moments you chose really work to convey Dean's recovery. I really like the development of your newandimproved!Cas :-)

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xxkaytayxx August 28 2010, 02:44:21 UTC
Thank you! I kind of panicked when I saw how long this was getting, and even then I was scared everything with Dean would feel rushed. I'm glad it worked for you. :)

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mulder200 August 28 2010, 04:22:47 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I like how Dean tries to keep his promise to Sam even as it makes him miserable. This is not the life he wanted or choose but he does it out of guilt and obligation.

And I love your Cas here. He's wiser and more powerful but still cares for and loves Dean and wishes to help him heal. Dean doesn't make this easy for him but Cas still tries until he gets through. It's that loyalty and determination that makes him so awesome.

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xxkaytayxx August 28 2010, 15:11:44 UTC
Thank you. :) Whenever I play with post-season five, I always try to keep things like Dean's promise in the forefront. I'm also glad you enjoyed this little version of Cas, since I was trying to create a balance, and I'm happy it worked for you!

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aliassmith August 28 2010, 05:49:30 UTC
This was the perfect cap to season 5. The detail you put into Dean's recovery really got to me-- it's so often glossed over in fics, all this healing he has to do to get to anywhere approaching 'normal', or 'okay'. Seeing Cas and Lisa's patience with him was so touching. Really, really a gorgeous fic. Well done!

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xxkaytayxx August 28 2010, 15:15:24 UTC
Thank you so much! I definitely think everything that happened would make Dean need a lot of recovery time, so I tried to give that due attention. I'm glad you liked it!

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huttan August 28 2010, 14:47:23 UTC
oAo

Im so glad that you put a focus around Dean and his abandonment issues. The way you made losing Sam NOT okay. -snivel- It was a beautiful read and I'll be coming back to reread it ;w; <3

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xxkaytayxx August 28 2010, 15:16:40 UTC
Thank you. :) I was afraid I'd drag it out to much and the reader would get bored, so I'm happy you enjoyed it!

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xxkaytayxx August 29 2010, 02:29:12 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it, and that's such a nice thing to say! The spots about time were my favorite ones, too. :)

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