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xxpennylane

& OH THOSE LONG WINTER NIGHTS

Jan 31, 2005 17:10

i can recall trudging through the dead of winter with thick bundled bodies and clouded breath watching every step eventhoughiknewyoudcatchmeififell counting down to the warmth and sunny days of march we could use a little bright in all this gray perhaps a snowflake fluttering down just so perfectly framing the universe for a hushed moment or a cup ( Read more... )

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anonymous February 2 2005, 16:08:44 UTC

i really like it. it's a turn on how it's all one huge thought, and you don't even finish it off with hard punctuation. oh,and the letsstartarevolutionandmakeeverythingoneword thing is really catchy. i'll spread the word.

ps - - if you don't have a title, this may seem kind of random but u should use "faithful." it's also ur mood, and it just went good.

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