Until the Day We Gain Wings - Aoi/Uruha (1/3)

[xxshamisen]

Title: Until the Day We Gain Wings
Chapter(s): 1/3
Author: xxshamisen
Genre: Romance, angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Disclaimer: Don't own anything except for my stories.
Summary: It was only for two days and one night, in an autumn in Hokkaido.
Comment: Used rheakurokawa's prompt. ^^

Comments

[rukixtora]

Oh my. *-*
That was so..
♥♥♥♥ xD

:D I can't wait until the next chapter.
Yuh~.

[xxshamisen]

LOL! xDD Your lack of words touches my heart. xDD

Thank you for reading! ^^

[murmeldyr]

I really liked the mood in this! Your writing style is quite nice if I may say so~

[xxshamisen]

Thank you very much! I'm really flattered and glad that you like my writing style. I'm actually kinda conscious about it since it's mostly RP-style, if that makes any sense =\

Anyways, thanks again for reading~ ♥

[kawasakininja]

You started writing another AoixUruha story! I guess I should thank rheakurokawa :) I loved the ferris wheel idea and not to sound too smart but I thought it was a metaphor for something else :) The way you described it in the beginning, the feelings riding a ferris wheel would evoke just seemed very similar to feelings of falling in love with someone. Either you are joyous or uncertain. Uruha and Aoi were very well captured, Uruha just being more open one and Aoi very pensive. I loved the last line :)

[kawasakininja]

Oh, only one more thing, I don't know what to make of it. Ferris wheel was supposed to be from Germany, right? But in the next sentence there is a mention of a Dutch carnival. Is that supposed to be the same ferris wheel and the carnival. Because Dutch is an adjective for things from Netherlands (or Holland) and for things from Germany adjective is just German. And if I'm not mistaken GazettE were in Germany, so maybe Aoi wouldn't refer to it as some European country. Especially since he remembered it well because there was no food :)

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[xxshamisen]

There is lack of fics in the Aoi/Uru category, me thinks. *nods* So yay for more Aoi/Uru~ xDD Haha well I am trying to say something here, but it's not about ferris wheels xDD Although the stuff here especially about the bad side of ferris wheels is true for me. It was nerve wrecking writing that part because I'm terribly afraid of heights, so if I made ferris wheels sound bad I win I'm sorry xD

Srsly though it's not about the ferris wheels xDD

Oh, well, I'm not being particular from which European country the carnival came, so I just wrote there what country first came in mind xDD And LOL sorry about that, I suppose I was trying to look smart when I dun have internet to research my stuff >_<;; *bricked* I was seriously thinking Deutsch = Dutch >_<;; Obviously somebody's not from Europe xDD Never doing that again, gomen~ xDD

Ahaha I didn't know about that~ >_<;; I guess I better read more Gazeinterviews.

Thank you very much for pointing those stuff out~ *huggleclingcrash* ♥

[kawasakininja]

About GazettE being in Germany, don't take my word for granted. I was wrong before, I'm not long in this fandom so I get facts messed up. But I know they were in Europe in the past. I kind of thought it was something like Deutsch = Dutch :) I saw you're not from Europe so it's more than understandable. Dutch thing kind of confuses me too and I am from Europe :)

[arigachun]

I really like this chapter a lot! It was beautiful. The ferris wheel reminded me the one of Yokohama. I remember our convo on Ferris wheels. ^0^ It also reminded me of Plastic Tree's "Replay".

[xxshamisen]

Ahaha, yes the talk about the ferris wheels. O_O;; Those things are made of pure evil pretty nice. xDD Well at least you know the reason why this fic is written this way xDD

Oooh... wait, why dun I have that PuraTuri song on my iTunes? DDDD= Will DL it later, then~

Thank you for reading~ ♥

[arigachun]

hehehe...yes. i was like i think i know what's coming. XD but i loved it! ^0^

sure. i love that song! <3

[fallensublimity]

"You´ve already reached the sky"
Wow, I liked that sentence very much! To me the whole thing about the ferris wheel has some metaphoric meaning... I dont know, it feels like it´s indicating their relationship, where wonderful moments but also danger are hidden x3 I can´t explain well what I mean ;_;
Anyways, this fic was really beautiful, I´m looking forward to the next chapter <3

[xxshamisen]

Ohohoho, I believe it really depends on the reader how they interpret the ferris wheel metaphor. ^^

Ahaha, the next part is up. ^^ Thanks for reading ne~ ♥