Sugarcoats and Heartbeats - Aoi/Uruha (1/1)

[xxshamisen]

Title: Sugarcoats and Heartbeats
Chapter(s): 1/1
Author: xxshamisen
Genre: Romance, slight angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Disclaimer: Real people, real circumstances, fake stories.
Summary: Aoi would rake his hand through his hair and shake his head softly, musing on how stupid it was to be so obsessed over something so human such as

Comments

[kawasakininja]

Well, now I see your notice.

While Aoi could be considered the most distant out of the five of them, Uruha could certainly give the coldest stares anybody could ever throw. At least, that was the case for Aoi.
I loved this part, I guess I am a sucker for Uruha giving Aoi a cold shoulder.
Ok, if my eyes didn't deceive me they had sex, right, right? If that is the case I like how you pointed it out that it didn't make them any closer actually. But Aoi got what he was waiting for in the end I guess, and it took a colored sprinkled ice-cream to get it. Uruha is so easy :))) No, I guess Aoi kind of grew on him.

[xxshamisen]

._.

LOL well that's what's actually happening anyways xDD

Haha they had sum smex, yes. And yeah, it's more on the 'Aoi grew on him' thing. I mean, if sex doesn't get you closer, what will xDD Unless you're not really in love with that person AND I GOTTA STOP SPILLING MORE DETAILS, IT'S HOW YOU GUYS PERCEIVE THE FIC THAT COUNTS. D:

[kawasakininja]

Yes, it is. Source of my constant heartbreak :)))

Yes, sex doesn't bring you closer if you're not in love.
Damn, never a happy ending with these two :)))

[xxshamisen]

HEY I MAKE HAPPY AOI/URU ENDINGS D:

[cherryrazor]

I'm sorry that my comment is coming in so late. I've been running around and doing a lot of stuff, going to school and working my ass off so I haven't had time to comment on anything. I've barely had time to get online and read stuff.

You never failt to amaze me with your stories and this was no exception. I think it was sweet. Aoi being secretly in love with Uruha. Uruha not knowing about it... it's just all so realistic in how you've written it.

I'ma put this in my mems so that I can read it again later ^^

[xxshamisen]

LOL tis okay, I love reading comments regardless of the time it was left here. ♥

Awww, you make me blush dear~ o///o But anyways, I'm really glad you like it. Thanks for reading and mem'ing! ^^

[heygeorge]

Oooooooh I like observing Aoi, lurking the sidelines, throwing looks at elusive Uruha. And not being ashamed of it either. I like Aoi is questioning himself for the choices he made in his life but as I read further, he doesn't guestion his "obsessive classifying" of anything Uruha. Such an Aoi-line: Sometimes he found himself running after Uruha for no reason at all, as if trying to seek for his approval!
Ahaha there was pain churning in my stomach for Aoi in the restaurant, with the nadulterated crease on the younger’s expression and Aoi dispassionately analyzing Uruha's face, knowing Uruha doesn't like being there but oh well! And I liked Aoi who had his hands in his pockets, while Uruha walked with his arms folded across his chest I can clearly picture that in my head.
I'm a bit unsure of Uruha's genuine smile after recieveng ice cream, though. Maybe he just likes ice cream but we all hope Aoi is slowly but surely made his way under Uruha's skin! Yay!

[xxshamisen]

Well he does seem to be seeking Uru's approval xDD Yeah, unrequited love is unrequited.

Or is it xDD *bricked*

YAY FOR AOI/URU. ♥ And thanks for reading! ^^