Blood Drinkers (WIP, rough copy, Chapter one&two.)

[xxsilentchaosxx]

Chapter One.

A rat scuttled across the dank stone floor, sniffing its way toward its next meal. Its beady black eyes gleamed in semi-darkness. Deep in the shadows there was a shape lying against the wall reeking of unwashed human and congealing blood. The rodent stole towards it, following the mingling scents.
 Pink nose twitching, the rat

Comments

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8D That was so cool! I like the universe you've set up, and these first couple chapters were very exciting.

"She'd kissed him when they were nine, and he'd never quite recovered." xD That was funny.

I'd love to read more when you post it.

[xxsilentchaosxx]

Why thank you!
You didn't think the first chapter dragged a bit? But yeah, I've got the third chapter written, it's the fourth that's giving me problems. Not fun.

(I liked that line too, Flins is an odd duck, I swear)