Yah My second Fic (again be gentle)

[xxsilentxstarxx]

“Owwie”

“I’m going to be in soooo much … OUCH too hot!”

Zhou Mi heard this as he walked towards the cloud of black smoke billowing out of the kitchen.  Dreading every step and knowing that what he was about to discover was not going to be good.  For Anyone.  The kitchen was Gege’s domain and no one entered under pain of death or something like

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[xxsilentxstarxx]

Really
i've never posted at a community.
i'm not sure maybe i will but i might be to nervous.

[volatileflame]

so cute X3 this was just sooooo adorable. love it! and don't worry about the structure. trust me, yours is fine ~ i've seen WAY worse. besides, i really think it's the story that counts, and this one, is fabulous <3

[xxsilentxstarxx]

thank you
i was soooo nervous posting

[dream4fatgirl]

keh... henli ah....you're too cute for words!

[xxsilentxstarxx]

i'm glad you liked it XD
thank you

[ai_fantasy9]

This is fucking adorable.

*Memo*

[xxsilentxstarxx]

thank you glad you liked it XD
i was so nervous posting

[ai_fantasy9]

even though there's mimi in there, would you like to post this on the Hanry LJ community? it's really cute ;)

[xxsilentxstarxx]

sure i'd like to post there too can you send me a link.

[leunah23]

this sooo cute!

[xxsilentxstarxx]

Thank You XD