I wrote a short story, so read it..and comment on what you think.

[xxstripped]

“Shut up, shut up, shut up. Don’t you know who I am?” he said. His whole body shook with anger. His glistening back glowed in the light shining from the crack above the bathroom door. Through the crack also came the sounds of music and party goers laughing and just being drunk teenagers, the people I would have called my friends about an hour ago

Comments

[inner_beauty_x]

I thought it was really good.

[xonelastrefrain]

Awesome. I really liked it.

[taintedlove19]

veryy good! i liked your writing style a lot