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[xyliette]

Title: They Bring Me to You
Pairing: Mark/Addison, bits of Derek/Addison
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Pre-Seattle. Addison ends up on a camping excursion during Spring Break.
For: phelipa

Comments

[maddisonislove]

I'm totaly reading this at my friends house while she's sleeping. (Yes, i'm so pathetic I sneak on people's computers because I have fanfiction withdraw) anyway, this was so good and the last line was just pure perfection. I can totaly picture Addison freaking out for being scared while she's camping and the fact that Mark was there for her made me very, very happy. You're an incredible writer♥

[xyliette]

I read while I'm on vacation via phone, then again, I vacation with family and that's stressful so...I get it. Thank you very much!

[citron_presse]

he'll never forget the moment she first molded herself against him, a seemingly perfect fit under the wisps of clouds and burning stars

Aw! This is lovely - gentle, funny, intimate, a little bit poignant and so very them. I loved their comfort together: they do fit! In my head, Mark is never quite so comfortably happy as when things are momentarily working out with Addison. I think that was also true on the show and I had a real sense of that here at the end. Just lovely - thank you :)

[xyliette]

Ah, LJ ate my seemingly witty reply. Darn.

I was thinking that when Mark is feeling good about them, his world is amazing, but at the same time Addison's is painfully imploding, that's why I love them. Glad you liked it, thank you! :)

[kizzykarla]

Funny, poignant & beautiful writing.

I loved these parts especially:

'Addison knew the second she met Derek Shepherd that her life was never going to be the same, just not in the way Derek assumed it would be infinitely different. '

'She knew she would never be able to forget the day she met Derek Shepherd, because it was also the day she met Mark.'

♥

[xyliette]

Thank you! I was pretty happy with the way that came together. I'm all for minimal effort. ;)

[crazychica802]

I like :)

[xyliette]

Yay!

(thank you)

[anonymous]

Back from my vacation! And I find a Mark/Addison fanfic written by you, so good! Thanks. And...are you back? Can I hope to see ATGN soon?