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Dec 06, 2009 20:13

Title: a Thousand Paper Cranes
Pairing: Sam/Addison
Rating: R
Word Count: 9,000 ish.
Summary: Post 310, the exploration of a relationship neither is sure they should pursue.

( walking cloud and deep red sky, flag fluttered and the sun shined )

shipper: sam/addison

Comments 27

lilacmermaid December 7 2009, 05:14:16 UTC

Great job! Besides Naomi walking in on Sam and Addison, her initial reaction here is kind of my worst nightmare, but I liked how you resolved it.

I also loved your line "I thought I'd be a parent" - when Addison's Mom was talking about how being a mother had ruined her life, I totally thought that was the moment that Addison was going to implode, but then it was never mentioned again and I was so disappointed.

xyliette December 13 2009, 23:18:55 UTC

If Naomi wasn't...alive, I'd be all over this ship. And YES! That scene with her mother, that was all I could think about too, and then nothing happened. And now we'll be swept up in the crossover to distract us. Ugh.

Anyway, thank you!

salmon_scrubs December 7 2009, 05:26:19 UTC

This was so incredibly perfect!

I've been thinking a lot about Sam and Addison lately. I'm really warming up to the idea of them as a couple and while, Naomi creates a bit of a problem, I'd love to see her accept them.

xyliette December 13 2009, 23:20:06 UTC

I waver back and forth on this couple being acceptable, but I love Sam so much that mostly I just want nothing bad to come of it, whichever way they decide.

Thanks for reading!

feelgoodlost December 7 2009, 06:32:52 UTC

Holy mother of god this is wonderful. I don't really want this whole Addison/Sam thing to advance on the show, but this fic is just fantastic.

I was hoping you would write something relating to the most recent episode. I love it. :)

xyliette December 13 2009, 23:20:37 UTC

Thank you, I was definitely struck by the little ship bug, it was fun. :)

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xyliette December 13 2009, 23:21:23 UTC

I'm glad you thought Sam was in character, he was surprisingly difficult, I don't know anything about him really.

Thank you!

anonymous December 7 2009, 10:52:27 UTC

OMG! I never thouhgt I would have told that, but I loved it! I think I'm about to be on board with this ship.The first kiss wa so awkward,they were still like brothr and sister, but then in the last episode something changed, and maybe it's not so awkward anymore.
That said, you wrote a beautiful story! Thanks!
irene

xyliette December 13 2009, 23:22:01 UTC

I'll take awkward, it's humorous and fun, you know? Thank you for reading this!