Oooh First Commentoracle_thunderJanuary 14 2009, 05:27:20 UTC
Love JD showing some backbone to Perry this chapter. Let's see how long it lasts. Oh and looking forward to Sammy time :) I think you're right to include some Turk time. I love how you juxtaposed a funny situation (Todd humping the mattress) with a serious moment (Turk talking about his feelings). Really liking the sequel so far.
I love that you're writing a sequel, the first part of this story was one of the first stories I ever read about Scrubs and I very, very much liked it =) The sequel seems quite different and I just have to ask - Will it continue on more of a... funny note or will we get some angsty drama like in the first part? I mean, the title's still "Love in FEAR" and I would love to see some angst again! Not saying I don't like the sequel how it went so far! As the first comment says, the change from funny Todd situation to serious Turk/JD conversation was great, just like in the actual series - I love it, when you can find that in stories. I'd love to know how long JD will keep up the no sex policy or whether Perry will just take what he wants... Well, that would be angsty drama for real xD Keep on writing, I really like your style and I'm anxiously waiting for the next update!
The title is actually just cause I couldn't think of anything else, and I was worried that if I posted it with a different name people wouldn't recognize it.
I'm trying to go for a lighter theme since their relationship now is an actual relationship and not basically sex buddies. I garuntee some angst, mostly JD worrying about telling his friends.
Anyway, I'm glad you like it and thanx for the review!
Oh, this was great!I love this chapter.The whole make-up thing. "So you've been madly in love with me since day one?" Of course he's been! I don't think JDs no-sex policy will survive the movie night....*grins dirty*
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I think you're right to include some Turk time. I love how you juxtaposed a funny situation (Todd humping the mattress) with a serious moment (Turk talking about his feelings). Really liking the sequel so far.
Poor Barbie :)
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I neglected JD's friends just as much as he did in the original 'Love In Fear'.
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The sequel seems quite different and I just have to ask - Will it continue on more of a... funny note or will we get some angsty drama like in the first part? I mean, the title's still "Love in FEAR" and I would love to see some angst again!
Not saying I don't like the sequel how it went so far! As the first comment says, the change from funny Todd situation to serious Turk/JD conversation was great, just like in the actual series - I love it, when you can find that in stories.
I'd love to know how long JD will keep up the no sex policy or whether Perry will just take what he wants... Well, that would be angsty drama for real xD
Keep on writing, I really like your style and I'm anxiously waiting for the next update!
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I'm trying to go for a lighter theme since their relationship now is an actual relationship and not basically sex buddies. I garuntee some angst, mostly JD worrying about telling his friends.
Anyway, I'm glad you like it and thanx for the review!
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love the chapter and can't wait for the next one
8D
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"So you've been madly in love with me since day one?"
Of course he's been!
I don't think JDs no-sex policy will survive the movie night....*grins dirty*
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