blinko

Mar 07, 2005 16:43

nick yanked at the thick root in the ground, brushed aside dirt, it dug itself into his fingernails. a wind picked up and the sky looked like it wanted to vomit ( Read more... )

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devilsdirtybath March 8 2005, 05:05:40 UTC
i really love this.
sometimes i really hate that you have to go through so much pain with little situations.
then things like this come out of it. you produce the most beautiful art when your in pain. i think thats when you feel the most of your emotion.
either way, i think i would rather see you happy, just produce alot right now while youre still sad.

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thisisbliss March 8 2005, 21:53:41 UTC
Ditto.

That whole tree/eyeball thing was neat. I imagined it in my head and thought, "Wow, that is kinda creepy!" Creepy in a cool way.
My mind really did paint a picture with that whole story. It's amazing what one can do with words! You are very good at painting pictures with words, my friend.

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yacob March 9 2005, 00:04:55 UTC
thanks! i think really all i had to convey was my mood and the corresponding weather outside, so i just wanted to turn my brain out and create an image. glad it worked.

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