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yahalomay

(Untitled)

Sep 27, 2009 12:12

( NCIS fiction - Rehabilitation )

fic, ncis

Comments 14

vamp926 September 27 2009, 02:47:32 UTC

This is beautiful! Good job!!

yahalomay September 27 2009, 03:51:08 UTC

Thank you! =)

bonesaholic September 27 2009, 02:53:14 UTC

Really enjoyed this story. Well written!

yahalomay September 27 2009, 03:51:44 UTC

Thank you very much. =)

sara_f_black September 27 2009, 04:49:38 UTC

OMG!! This is a great story!!!! I love that you made Ziva said "‘I do not want people to treat me like I am broken, otherwise I will stay broken.’"

GREAT story!! and I just love it was Gibbs who sent her with Tony! :D

yahalomay September 28 2009, 12:08:32 UTC

That's my favourite line. =) Thanks for your comments!

krisrussel September 27 2009, 12:08:56 UTC

Very nicely done, very good characterization and the ending is beautiful.
Awesome job!

yahalomay September 28 2009, 12:09:44 UTC

Thank you - I didn't want to make the ending too ... epic? But I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your review!

everybody__lies September 27 2009, 15:27:02 UTC

Aww that was cute. Great job, loved Tony's thoughts and whatnot. ♥

yahalomay September 28 2009, 12:10:03 UTC

Thanks! ♥