This... was a very interesting spin on things, I think I liked it.
She slid off the table. ‘It takes you an average of 1.7 hours to fall asleep.’ Then she walked out of the room.
John wondered how she knew that. It was kind of creepy - but sort of flattering at the same time. Surprisingly(?), this part left me the most speechless.. xD
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She slid off the table. ‘It takes you an average of 1.7 hours to fall asleep.’ Then she walked out of the room.
John wondered how she knew that. It was kind of creepy - but sort of flattering at the same time.
Surprisingly(?), this part left me the most speechless.. xD
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This was cute. Nicely done.
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Really, very nicely done.
pleasure to read! :)
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