Ripples in the Water (4/7)

[yahnknshadows]

Title: Ripples in the Water
Author: yahnknshadows
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Genre: Dean/Jared; AU
Warnings: AU, slash, mpreg (non-graphic), language, hunting, life
Disclaimer: Lies, I tell you! It's all a lie!"
World Count: This part: 3,971; Total: 24,561
Summary: Jared keeps waking up in the wrong place, with people he doesn't know, in a world he doesn't

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

WOOHOOO!!!!!!

Absolutely AWESOME new chapter!!!

Can't wait to read more!

[yahnknshadows]

Thank you!

[framedhim]

Dean huffed and pushed himself up. "Fine, I'm not going to beg," he said, heading back to the kitchen where they had seriously no food.

I'm glad he backed off, allowed Jared the opportunity to come clean. It's strikingly similar to how I visualize Dean from the show.

Loved the chapter, excited about the next one. Oh, and the training scene was a fun read. Laying out the steps, Jared's frustration was evident.

[yahnknshadows]

Yeah, Dean isn't the pushy kind, he's sort of like .... "Tell me, don't tell ... " Next chapter will be up soon, thank you for commenting!

[beatlemaniac9]

How is it that Jared's eating pizza when he's allergic to milk? Milk is in cheese.

Excellent chapter! I really didn't expect for Jared to have a teacher hitting on him...

I needed more like yesterday...just sayin'.

[yahnknshadows]

Despite your allusion to our lack of intelligence, we're quite aware of the fact that Jared is lactose intolerant and still eats pizza. Both Shadow and I know people who suffer this allergy and still are able to eat milk products in moderation without negative side effects. Eating mac 'n cheese would've messed up his stomach because it is predominantly made up of cheese and there isn't enough starch in the noodles to counteract the cheese. Pizza, on the other hand, has bread, meat, sauce, and vegetables to balance out the effects of the cheese. ^_~

[beatlemaniac9]

I didn't mean to imply that you guys lacked in intellegence. Sorry.