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Oct 12, 2007 21:03

My son jumped off the rock
into the lake, receding.
Impact of the rising sun
Shimmer on the skin of waves

The night before was a dream
of my father, dead for the first time.
The wisps of terrible narrative
on the steam of my morning coffee.

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shesnoemu October 13 2007, 00:27:05 UTC
Ok, I'm going to assume that you have not written this with an ironic sentiment (or, at least, not completely) and I'm going to try to persuade you to rethink what you've written ( ... )

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