Meteors [Chapter 4]

[yakuso5u]

Chapter: 4

Pairings: YooMin

Rating: PG

Genre: Romance, Fluff, slight Angst

Summary:

There is only one truth, Changmin believes, and only one question - is it the one you want?
There is only chance, Yoochun thinks - the meteor crashes, or it doesn’t. And if it does the only question is, will you run fast enough or let the stars collide?

Comments

[shinchul303]

The entire kid with the cereal scene was absolutely flawless.

Yoochun rings so true throughout. Sorry to see Changmin isn't going to fit the usual love story plot run, but your soft introduction of Junsu holds great promise.

Really enjoying this. It's more laid back than IYCSWIS but every bit as complex and rewarding. It's just that this time the complexity is in the characters and the plot stays out of the way.

Relished the light bulb stand - I can just picture Min's sudden shock.

[yakuso5u]

The whole challenge this time is in unraveling their characters the right way so that it's not *too* confusing and makes the story interesting, even though - as you pointed out - this fic is not so much about the plot, but the protagonists themselves~ I'm glad that you're enjoying it!

Chapter 5 coming later today, thank you so much for your comment as always :')

[pichiruchi]

Noooo changmin don't look at her nooooo.

The unrequited love trip better be worthy, but now that I am considering this.... for yoomin is more common to see min suffering over chun so this is a nice change.

I love jaejoong and his quirks. The rainbow aisle would look cute. And junsu is priceless. I am sure he already knows or at least suspects how chun feels, because he is so obvious now, awww.

[yakuso5u]

Yoochun is going to go through some hard mood swings, I hope you'll forgive me x) (but that's also because I love his drama queen side :p)

JaeSu shall have important roles to play as well, if only because you always need a weird bff in life, I'm happy you like their characters so far!

Thanks for your comment dear, next part coming later today! :)

[vhii1217]

Stalked you for weekend treat and realised there are 2 posts for this chappie and I commented on the other one :O

[yakuso5u]

I know I double-posted it by mistake >< Answering your other comment first, posting the next part right after! :)

(omg I've got a stalker *proud* LOL)

[keyhun]

hi~~~~ i'm late because it was finals. but this is, as always, such a nice read. i'm not going to get mad at you about the unrequited love (yet!!) because i'm interested to see how it will (hopefully) develop into requited love. i'm really interested to see development and realizations and everything that comes along with them. (but if u make my babies suffer too long i will cry T____T)

[yakuso5u]

Hiiii, and thanks for the comment!

I hope your finals went well!
I'm afraid the suffering will go on for a little while, but this is a fanfic right, and you know what happens to unrequited love in fanfics :P

I'll let Jae comfort you if you cry, deal?