Meteors [Chapter 5]

[yakuso5u]

Chapter: 5

Pairings: YooMin

Rating: PG

Genre: Romance, Fluff, slight Angst

Summary:

There is only one truth, Changmin believes, and only one question - is it the one you want?
There is only chance, Yoochun thinks - the meteor crashes, or it doesn’t. And if it does the only question is, will you run fast enough or let the stars collide?

Comments

[shinchul303]

Changmin reminds very much of Yuzuru in Seven Days (the movie that is). For the first time he's found someone (Seryou) who accepts him as he is. Yoochun is that to Changmin, and he'd be devastated to lose his friendship.

Jaejoong in this chapter is, oddly, very mature and adult. I applaud him for calling out Changmin and his blindness to Yoochun's crush. Just a kid, really, in spite of his bearing and acid tongue. Jaejoong cares deeply about his friend.

The hug near the end was excruciating. Poor Yoochun. To quote from Seven Days, Changmin is really dense.

[yakuso5u]

I have not seen that movie (putting the reference aside for watching later though ^^), but it seems to reflect well the dynamics that this chapter was meant to highlight: that in spite of their differences, Yoochun was the first to accept Changmin just as he is, naturally, without question.
Changmin needed this kind of relationship, badly, and that's why he feels his connection to Yoochun so strongly, and why he also trusts him blindly. And thus Yoochun is the only person who knows some sides of him, including that he's at times "just a kid" as you grasped so well.

Please bear with Changmin being dense a little longer cos I'm afraid he's going to be trying your patience... :)

Thank you so much for your comment!!

[keyhun]

yoomin hugs and yoochun wanting to comfort changmin and changmin not wanting yoochun to be mad at him are my favorite things in the world. ♥♥♥

[kazemaki]

Me too hahahaha

[yakuso5u]

everything yoomin is hardcore ♥♥♥ *adds yoomin being possessive of each other to the list*

[mhirisa]

I'm re-reading the fic, and just saw this comment.
Can we add Yoomin cuddling to the list? ♥

[vhii1217]

Hunny why did you do this T___T

[yakuso5u]

HIIII ♥

Your comments are so gold, I'm going to frame them. Or make a book of them that I can read on bad days >.< *hugs

♥️

[kazemaki]

A lot of things can happen, but at every weekend, we still have a new chapter to read. It has became my joy and my habit of looking forward to Sunday to enjoy the new chapter and meet my adorable yoomin 😋 I wanted to comment in every chapter but for some reasons I kept getting distracted... sorry for that. i'll try harder

Looks at these parts:
"By that time Changmin’s heart feels twice its normal weight and half its normal size, and he still cannot find anything appropriate to say and make things better."
And
Changmin hits him with his plastic bag, smiling widely despite himself as his heart suddenly puffs up back to its usual size - much, much lighter nowI shouldn't have laughed at my baby Minnie but seriously how can you write something adorable like this?? You're killing me. I'm dying of this cuteness =))) No wonder why Yoochun's head over heels in love with him. I guess Yoochun is the type of man who worships everything about his lover. Am I right? Never mind. It seems like I was always wrong about them since I thought Yoochun

Re: ♥️

[yakuso5u]

First of all: thank you so much for those first few lines ♥ It really means a lot, to know you're anticipating this story. I have been working on this for more than a year now, and I was a little anxious to know how it'd be received once I started posting it. Words like yours are truly encouraging, I'm so glad to know you look forward to reading this every week! Thank you, I'll continue doing my best!

I think I'm dying a little every day myself over Changmin's cuteness or handsome or snark or whatever, so actually it's not so hard to make Yoochun feel all those XD You're right about him btw, he's the type who doesn't fall easily for someone, but when he does, he does with his entire soul~

As for Changmin's feelings... you can already tell yourself there's more to this "friendship" than Changmin himself believes :) There is a long way to go for both of them before they make something happen, but where would be the fun if it was all easy? ^o^

Thank you so so much again for your comment, and see you later with the next chapter! :)