Meteors [Chapter 6]

May 21, 2017 00:55

Chapter: 6

Pairings: YooMin

Rating: PG

Genre: Romance, Fluff, slight Angst

Summary:

There is only one truth, Changmin believes, and only one question - is it the one you want?
There is only chance, Yoochun thinks - the meteor crashes, or it doesn’t. And if it does the only question is, will you run fast enough or let the stars collide?
Of escapes and October 24 )

tvxq, meteors, yoomin, fanfic

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shinchul303 May 21 2017, 14:30:59 UTC
Good for Changmin - he came through for his friend. And Yoochun really needed it.

Heavy chapter but beautiful ending.

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yakuso5u May 26 2017, 14:19:45 UTC
Changmin cares A LOT, like Yoochun does, and in the end it keeps bringing them back together :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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vhii1217 May 21 2017, 19:25:22 UTC
AWWWW ( ... )

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yakuso5u May 26 2017, 16:14:24 UTC
WOW favorite chapter?!! ^o^ *basking in feels ( ... )

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I'm in love mhirisa May 23 2017, 23:12:00 UTC
Hi hi, well I had been reading your fic since the beginning but I'm shy for write comments. All this weeks had been a roller coaster of emotions, the way they 'met' -so odd and unique, so lovely- had me wishing to do the same. How they had grown attached to each other even when no one realized it. Their feelings and personalities are so unique and different from each other, like oil and water, they don't mix, but stay beside each other anyway, around the other one and being so possessive. Friendship and love, in the end Friendship is love without its wings. And Yoochun wings have still to grow stronger. Changmin in other hand, he's experiencing something new with his relationship, acting his age, being on cloud number 9, yet there's something else, he still have to realize, labeling his relationship with Yoochun as friendship, but...is the right label that bond deserves ( ... )

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Re: I'm in love yakuso5u May 26 2017, 17:22:15 UTC
Hiiii omg and thank you for taking a while to comment here! I know the feeling of being shy (I was too XD), but comments are so important for writers you know, thank you so much for leaving a message here ♡

I'm glad you enjoy the (slow) pace of the story so far, I know it's not everyone's cup of tea. And I love this too > "Friendship is love without its wings". Indeed, a major part of this story is about how you chose to label feelings and sometimes overlook other possibilities *nudges Changmin hard*

Really thank you so much, I hope you continue enjoying this story as it unravels, next update tomorrow! And thanks for the friend request too ;-)

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Should have written it earlier but procrastinated ... kazemaki May 27 2017, 17:42:23 UTC
Soooooo. What's bad news? Yoochun is officially broken, both his heart and his wallet. Lol. I always wanted to ask if you were inspired by his song "How much love do you have in your wallet" to write their date scenes where yoochun being so generous ( ... )

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Re: Should have written it earlier but procrastinated ... yakuso5u June 2 2017, 22:10:36 UTC
Hiiii!!~
Ahahaa that's an interesting reference but no, I must say I didn't really think of "How much love do you have in your wallet", though it's definitely a magnanimous song :p

I'm not so surprised you had to backtrack... there were many hints here and there about their stories and personalities that might have gone unnoticed during first read, but WOW I didn't think anyone would actually go through past chapters just to make sure they grasped those details O_o I'm... kind of touched ^^

Anyway, this > "He didn't give up, didn't fight for it either.", is incredibly accurate!! Omg that's exactly it, and you'll have (I'm sorry to say) even more definite proof of that in the next chapters... similarly, I guess you found some answers to your questions about Yoochun's university days.. really spot on!! :D

I'm really glad to know you're still enjoying this story (patiently XD) Thank you so much for your comment and analysis, it's all very interesting for me to read, giving me a new perspective on my own work :)

Next chapter tomorrow

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keyhun June 3 2017, 20:54:34 UTC
sorry i'm so late again :(

nath, how are you /such/ an incredible writer? everything you write from scenery to emotions to interactions to dialogue to thoughts is so awe-inspiring. it's a an absolute pleasure to read your writing and frankly i can't get enough!! but i especially like how even though it's so descriptive, it's still not /over/done. it's absolutely masterful ♥♥♥

changmin is so sweet and caring and it kills me. i love him.

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yakuso5u June 10 2017, 18:39:58 UTC
oh gosh too much praise let me hide LMAO (thank you TT____TT)

I'm glad you enjoy the style though... I enjoy writing and playing with the words and all, so I tend to have a lot of descriptive parts and I'm always afraid it's boring LOL but for this fic especially I really wanted to go with something slow so well, it's encouraging to know that even like this, it's still enjoyable ;-)

thank you so much for your comment!! ♥

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