Title : Otouto Love Me Chapter 4
Author : Nana aka
yamachiisuki Pairing : YamaChii, YamaRyu (one-sided), ChiiTaro (one-sided)
Rating : PG-13 to NC-17
Genre : Romance, Drama
Summary : Yamada Ryosuke hate his stepmother and her son, Yuri who suddenly interfere his life.
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it will make better than your own fingers )
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*covers cheeks*
*nose bleed*
*faints*
*turns into foam*
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OMGGG!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE!!!
THIS IS SO GOOD! I LOVE IT WHEN RYOSUKE GAVE CHII A LITTLE PECK ON HIS HIPS!!! *DIES OF FANGIRLING*
Good Job Nana chan!!!
I'm waiting for the next chappie~~~
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it make me melt too lol xDD glad you love this chapter! un~ un~ surely will make it better in next, arigatouuu *hugs*
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UN UN! I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE SO MUCH!!
Yuri chan better tell Ryu kun to back off!! he belongs to yamachan!!
and i wonder what yamachan will do after he kisses Yuri ne? and ow will Yuri act to that unexpected kissu ne?? argh!!
nana chan! you make my mind fill with questions now @.@
i need the next chappie!!! *stretch hands and beg*
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hehe,I'm so glad you like that scene, hahahh XDD *so excited reading your lovely comments* glad I make that cliffhanger *kicked* Chii only belong to Yama-chan ne!!
fuwaah you make me melting in happiness here >w< I'm feel so honored, will try my best ne XD arigatouuu XDD
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and Yuri's kiss getting hotter :O
and.... that unexpected moment !!!
KYAAA !!! Ryosuke give Yuri his first kiss !!!
Kya...kya....kyaaaa!!! *screaming crazily*
Great update,nana-chan!!!
waiting for the next one! ^^
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hyahh..the kiss?? really? it's hot?? wahaha..I'm afraid it won't xDD
sankyuuu as always Hikari-chan *hugs and kiss* ^_______^
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The HOT one! =]
hai..hai..
douita ne~ *hugs n kiss you back*
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You know why????
BECAUSE OF THE KISS!!! *WHACKED*
YAMADA HAS FALLEN TO CHII!!!
YAMADA HAS FALLEN TO CHII!!!
YAMADA HAS FALLEN TO.. *WHACKED BY YAMADA* xDDDD
OMG I'M GETTING REALLY HYPER READING THAT PART!!!!
although at first yamada got confused about his own feeling, whether he would stop helping ryuu or not, and ended with he help ryuu... (><)
but maybe chii's kiss made him realizes his own feeling ne.. (><)
uwaaaaa i can't wait to see more yamachii rabu-rabu on the next!! please continue it, nana-chan!!!!! thumbs up for you!!!!! d(><)b
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I'm glad you love it, writing both of kisses above make me almost fainting, I wonder if I can pass the faint when write the smut part *kicked* so am really glad you like it hoho xDD
Haha.. he whacks only because he's too embarassed since you said it out loud XDD
un~ I will continue for sure! arigatou Iv-sama >w< *hugs*
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haha..hope for that too in next~
wow you still up in this kind of hour? sugoii na :0 I already prepare to sleep anytime now since my eyes already sore xD
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I'll go to sleep now, my eyes can't hold it any longer lol xDD
oyasumii, Ren-chan ^________^
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:3 I really love this multi-chap~ love the chatacter of Yamada and Chinen, and yes of course Ryutaro's bubbly attitude LMAO~
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thanks for commenting ne, hontou ni ureshii XDD
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XD I love the calm Chinen and TsunTsun Yamada. Everytime Chinen teases his brother is cute :) But the parts Chinen started to avoid Yamada woah; Chinen is like unconsciously provoking his brother to do "something" :) I don't mean anything asdfghjkl, :) I want Yamada to accept Chinen but more TsunTsun moments pls. hahahaha
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provoking? maybe na hahah XDD I think you got me there x3
un~ I think there will be more tsuntsun scenes >w
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