Otouto Love Me Chapter 4

Dec 05, 2011 17:34

Title : Otouto Love Me Chapter 4

Author : Nana aka yamachiisuki

Pairing : YamaChii, YamaRyu (one-sided), ChiiTaro (one-sided)

Rating : PG-13 to NC-17

Genre : Romance, Drama

Summary : Yamada Ryosuke hate his stepmother and her son, Yuri who suddenly interfere his life.

it will make better than your own fingers )

fanfic, yamachii

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yukistrawberry December 5 2011, 12:30:52 UTC
*heart beat increase*
*covers cheeks*
*nose bleed*
*faints*
*turns into foam*

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OMGGG!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE!!!
THIS IS SO GOOD! I LOVE IT WHEN RYOSUKE GAVE CHII A LITTLE PECK ON HIS HIPS!!! *DIES OF FANGIRLING*

Good Job Nana chan!!!
I'm waiting for the next chappie~~~

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yamachiisuki December 5 2011, 12:48:40 UTC
uwaaa, thanks for visit and leaving such a lovely comments, Ichigo-chan :3 :3

it make me melt too lol xDD glad you love this chapter! un~ un~ surely will make it better in next, arigatouuu *hugs*

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yukistrawberry December 6 2011, 11:15:34 UTC
hehe nana chan~ gomen ne for not visiting so ling >< *ashamed*

UN UN! I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE SO MUCH!!
Yuri chan better tell Ryu kun to back off!! he belongs to yamachan!!

and i wonder what yamachan will do after he kisses Yuri ne? and ow will Yuri act to that unexpected kissu ne?? argh!!

nana chan! you make my mind fill with questions now @.@

i need the next chappie!!! *stretch hands and beg*

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yamachiisuki December 6 2011, 13:28:48 UTC
daijoubu yo x3 *hugs the cute Ichigo-chan*

hehe,I'm so glad you like that scene, hahahh XDD *so excited reading your lovely comments* glad I make that cliffhanger *kicked* Chii only belong to Yama-chan ne!!

fuwaah you make me melting in happiness here >w< I'm feel so honored, will try my best ne XD arigatouuu XDD

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hikarichan92 December 5 2011, 12:57:06 UTC
Ngahahahaha... Ryosuke feels jealous ?? xD
and Yuri's kiss getting hotter :O
and.... that unexpected moment !!!
KYAAA !!! Ryosuke give Yuri his first kiss !!!
Kya...kya....kyaaaa!!! *screaming crazily*
Great update,nana-chan!!!
waiting for the next one! ^^

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yamachiisuki December 5 2011, 13:22:06 UTC
finally ne Ryosuke >w< I want to know his next move too XDD

hyahh..the kiss?? really? it's hot?? wahaha..I'm afraid it won't xDD

sankyuuu as always Hikari-chan *hugs and kiss* ^_______^

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hikarichan92 December 5 2011, 13:25:47 UTC
of course,nana-chan !!!
The HOT one! =]
hai..hai..
douita ne~ *hugs n kiss you back*

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chii_mao_13 December 5 2011, 14:44:40 UTC
SPOT!

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yamachiisuki December 5 2011, 15:23:42 UTC
always wait for you, Iv-sama~ XDD

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chii_mao_13 December 8 2011, 14:19:53 UTC
Really love this chapter, nana-chan!!!!! XDDDD
You know why????
BECAUSE OF THE KISS!!! *WHACKED*
YAMADA HAS FALLEN TO CHII!!!
YAMADA HAS FALLEN TO CHII!!!
YAMADA HAS FALLEN TO.. *WHACKED BY YAMADA* xDDDD
OMG I'M GETTING REALLY HYPER READING THAT PART!!!!
although at first yamada got confused about his own feeling, whether he would stop helping ryuu or not, and ended with he help ryuu... (><)
but maybe chii's kiss made him realizes his own feeling ne.. (><)
uwaaaaa i can't wait to see more yamachii rabu-rabu on the next!! please continue it, nana-chan!!!!! thumbs up for you!!!!! d(><)b

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yamachiisuki December 8 2011, 15:07:21 UTC
WUHAAAAAA!! your comments drove me drowning in happiness here o(^0^)o I'm not deserve all of that yet I can't help but love your comments XDD

I'm glad you love it, writing both of kisses above make me almost fainting, I wonder if I can pass the faint when write the smut part *kicked* so am really glad you like it hoho xDD

Haha.. he whacks only because he's too embarassed since you said it out loud XDD

un~ I will continue for sure! arigatou Iv-sama >w< *hugs*

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yamachiisuki December 5 2011, 17:17:13 UTC
sankyuu so much Ren-chan x33 your comments always make me pleased >w<

haha..hope for that too in next~
wow you still up in this kind of hour? sugoii na :0 I already prepare to sleep anytime now since my eyes already sore xD

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yamachiisuki December 5 2011, 17:27:51 UTC
uwaaa sounds fun >w< you must have great times ne :D
I'll go to sleep now, my eyes can't hold it any longer lol xDD

oyasumii, Ren-chan ^________^

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mikanparadise December 5 2011, 19:07:46 UTC

:3 I really love this multi-chap~ love the chatacter of Yamada and Chinen, and yes of course Ryutaro's bubbly attitude LMAO~

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yamachiisuki December 6 2011, 02:02:12 UTC
uwah really?? I love their character too, thanks for saying that ^^ I'm imagine their character in my mind and try to turn into this, and afraid that its fail :D

thanks for commenting ne, hontou ni ureshii XDD

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mikanparadise December 6 2011, 02:50:40 UTC

XD I love the calm Chinen and TsunTsun Yamada. Everytime Chinen teases his brother is cute :) But the parts Chinen started to avoid Yamada woah; Chinen is like unconsciously provoking his brother to do "something" :) I don't mean anything asdfghjkl, :) I want Yamada to accept Chinen but more TsunTsun moments pls. hahahaha

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yamachiisuki December 6 2011, 03:07:14 UTC
nyahaha xDD glad to know you enjoy it, coz the same thing goes to me when writing it ^^

provoking? maybe na hahah XDD I think you got me there x3
un~ I think there will be more tsuntsun scenes >w

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