So honestly...Arioka and Into are actually my least favourite members of jump ( that's not to say I dislike either of them though) but I couldn't resist reading this because of the angstyness!
I'm really interested in the story, it seems like there's a lot going on here and I'd definitely be interested if you wrote an epilogue - especially if it's an angsty one! I'd love to know how things are from the YabuHika side too! You should write a side story too >_< *greedy*
Also...is this really your first attempt at fanfic? It's a very promising start if it is!!! My only...hmm...it's not really a criticism (suggestion maybe?) is that it's maybe rated a little high, R ratings usually involve some kind of mild/intermediate sexual content or a potentially equivalently disturbing topic (like drugs or self-harm - just off the top of my head).
The fic itself us good though :D I like the way you set it out so that we get to see both sides of the story!
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I'm really interested in the story, it seems like there's a lot going on here and I'd definitely be interested if you wrote an epilogue - especially if it's an angsty one! I'd love to know how things are from the YabuHika side too! You should write a side story too >_< *greedy*
Also...is this really your first attempt at fanfic? It's a very promising start if it is!!! My only...hmm...it's not really a criticism (suggestion maybe?) is that it's maybe rated a little high, R ratings usually involve some kind of mild/intermediate sexual content or a potentially equivalently disturbing topic (like drugs or self-harm - just off the top of my head).
The fic itself us good though :D I like the way you set it out so that we get to see both sides of the story!
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Thank you for reading and giving me a detailed feedback. I really appreciate it. It would really help me improve.
For the epilogue and the side story I'm currently thinking how to put it up. I dont want to break up YabuHika. Buuut I'll surely give an update.
Again thank you for reading. ☺️☺️
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