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[yamada_mia]

Tittle:illution [Chapter 2]
Author: me
Paring:yamada ryosuke,Chinen yuri, nakayama Yuma,NYC boys
Rating:Nc-17
Geneo:smut maybe
Summary:NYC boys  come from there tour concert and the hotel  was only 1 room for both yamada chinen and yuma  when they enter ther only one bed they have to share the bed,soon yamada star to ahve illution whit chinen and

Comments

[celightd]

FIRST AGAIN! <3

un! i must say that your english have improve! even if it's only a bit!! so try harder! you can ask me for help with english anytime you want! =)

uwah~ chii!~ bad boy! illusions too? XPXPXP

oh yess!!! you're writing bout illusions right? the spelling's illusion not illution XP (sorry for correcting *_*)

[yamada_mia]

Is okay fro correcting is that illution is like a way to say illusion on my contry im now

thank fro saying that is been prove but i still have long way to go celghtd

next is Romeo and juliet is fiction whti oc but i need people though

chii is not bad boy is not his fault yamada ia hot next step is yuma xD

[celightd]

ohh i see i see ^^

a long way to go, but at least you have shortened it by a but! =)

hmm~ OC fic...i don't read OC fics. lols. sorry!

LOLS! yess >.< blame the game not the player XP blame Yamada for being hot, not Chinen for being a bad boy XP

ohhhoooo~ YUMA! XPXPXP can't wait to see what dirty illusions this boy has XP

[hyuuchiha_miki]

Yay~ Updates!

Whose condom is that huh? Yamada is so ebil to actually said that it was Chinen's (although I don't know whose was it, but blaming his friend so quickly!) xD Chinen is such a naughty naughty boy~ Now how will he explain to Yamada ne?

Oooh~ Can't wait for the next chappie! Will wait patiently ^w^

[yamada_mia]

im glad you like it! i feel so happy
next chapter is yuma

[lyana_shinichi]

hahaha..you are so good aboutcreating fan fic..like it..^^