.........Pillow...( Eclipse)...Book...........

[yamagamis]

母
Mother

A Mother is:

Warm
Loving
Patient
Protective
Fierce
Stern
Jealous
Bitter
Cold

As my mother watched me board this ship, I could see in her eyes that she hated me. Flesh of her flesh. Blood of her blood. I could feel the

Comments

[angelsamael]

Lordy.

[yamagamis]

"Lordy"? *chuckles*

What does that mean?

[angelsamael]

Means I had to read it twice.
And just saying 'amazing' didnt seem to cut it. *smile*

[tokentales]

Masterful.

Awe inspiring.

Wonderfully well written.

[yamagamis]

Thank you.

I still need to edit it, though.

[charliegir1]

woooow! That was phenominal reading! :)

[yamagamis]

Muchas gracias.

I'm glad you liked.

[venatrix]

I understand it all so much now.. now that I've researched Japanese culture. The writing is fantastic as always.

And yes... Seiko and Venatrix need to sit and have some tea :)

[yamagamis]

Excellent.

What research have you done? I'm nosy.

[venatrix]

For my Forsaken PC that I don't get to play much, but she's fun :P

[maskandmirror]

Absolutely stunning. I think I may have to read it again, though. :)

[yamagamis]

I've done a little editing so I hope it flows better. ^_^

[maskandmirror]

It did. Read a bit smoother the second time through, that is.

However, it was no less amazing the first time. You are a fantastic writer.