Comments | yamihakkai: Friendship Part2

yamihakkai

Friendship Part2

May 27, 2007 18:28

Yo people! First of all I'd like to say "I'm sorry"... I am trying really hard to write new fics.... but this DAMN PC ate the second part of my fic... and I have to rewrite it... it'll take a while to do so.... this was supposed to be the 3rd part of it... but as it happens in the same time as the 2nd... I decided to post it anyway... I hope you ( Read more... )

marvel, billy, teddy, young avengers

Comments 6

guety May 28 2007, 13:31:55 UTC

The chapter was very cute and all, and the scene when Tommy and Billy are talking is lovely, but... Weren't they 9 years old? 9 years old kids don't kiss!! At least, when I was that age, I didn't even think about kisses. The fanfic is good, but you shold change their age to 12 or something like that.

yamihakkai May 28 2007, 17:06:07 UTC

Thanks for your comment... believe me or not... 9 year-old kids do a lot of things... I was thinking of putting them to 10 or 11 years old... if I put them 12 I'd go crazy with possibilities...

*Don't think I forgot your fic... I have already finished it... but I have to put it in the PC... It's about chocolates. I hpe you enjoy it!

guety May 28 2007, 17:27:29 UTC

yay, chocolates!! I can't wait to read it!

yamihakkai May 28 2007, 19:06:52 UTC

Posted on my LJ... If you like it, i'll post in the Young Avengers Community... or you can do i... feel free to use your fic! I hope you like it!

charlie_chan January 31 2008, 04:14:03 UTC

omg too cute too cute! ^w^ widdle Teddy and Billy kissed <3 hehe

yamihakkai February 1 2008, 01:10:14 UTC

Yep... it's so good to write alternative universes... because I can make they date since they were kids....