Days of despair (betaed!)

[yamitoyoru]

Title: Days of despair

Pairing: one-sided Ichi/Ren, one-sided Hichi/Ichi

POV: Hichigo’s

Rating: M

Genre: Drama/Romance

Words: 4185 (11,000 is my goal)

Chapter: 1/3

Warnings: AU, almost-rape?, sex reference, yaoi, near character death, lots of angst.

Beta: zealot1138

Summary: Ichigo couldn’t take it anymore. The pain, the quilt - it was

Comments

[yamitoyoru]

I know. I love it too. I think that's my best one-liner ever.

[sberrychan]

This is good! The emotions feel so real. I kinda feel sorry for Ichigo...not being able to tell Renji he likes him for fear of what the other would say. I can understand that to a point.

Nicely written! ^^

[yamitoyoru]

Thank you~!

Um, I feel sorry for Ichigo too, 'cause were it a fight he wouldn't care about what the rest of the world would say at all. That's how I see it at least.

[ferler]

AW, I really love this story! I think I begin to like Hichigo... or rather the hollow-self you characterised here. Aw, it's just so Ichigo-ish: to punish himself for being who he is, for the feelings he has...
"what a lousy excuse of a rapist you were": somehow I don't think either, Ichigo would hurt anybody from anger or even despair.

[yamitoyoru]

Thank you ^^. Glad to hear, since you're such a UraIchi fan ^^.

I imagine Ichi to go self-destructive when he's suffering and hurt himself though not always consciously. He fits the image or at least I believe he's simmilar to me in that.