A kiss (betaed!)

[yamitoyoru]

Title: A kiss

Pairing: Ren/Ichi

Genre: Romance/Humor

Rating: M

Warning: yaoi

Words: 1,191

Beta: zealot1138

A/N: This was my first fic above 1,000 words, my first non-angsty fic. One of the few fics of mine that I actually like. And it’s all thanks to zealot1138 that it’s beated! Thank you!

Summary: A silent touch. Warmth seeping through.

Comments

[spikykun]

Oh god, how much I love this. Seriously. I didn't want it to end. Ever.
This is the kind of fic that remind me that I'm female. I was a gushing, squeeing mess by the first kiss through the very last line, and guh. I usually hate it, the three little words are often too big for this pairing, but GUH the fact Renji's an annoying prick brought the ICness out into the open, beautiful and sweet and the words flowed and the scenes were wonderful. Really, it was sexy without sex and kept me satisfied without being too wordy. So, um, more RenIchi from you? :3

I think I got carried away with my comment again, but really, swell job on this. *adds to memories*

[yamitoyoru]

WAH! Really?! That means so much coming from you, spiky-sama - the RenIchi God. xD Seriously, I'm so in love with your R/I fiction, that hearing that you like my work is like... like... *takes a few deep breaths*... dunno, but it makes me all hyper. xD

So um, I don't know what to say xD. I'm really, really happy that you liked it, especially since it's a mess of random scenes that barely fit together. I'm gald I managed to keep them IC and still get them to say those three words. But sadly, there won't be any Ren/Ichi in quite a while. Other projects and christmas gifts come first.

Well, looks like I got carries away even more. xD
Thank you so, so much! *hugs*

[spikykun]

*blushes furiously* You're far too kind, but I'm glad you got all hyper! :D

*hugs baaack*

[hu3long2]

Ah, this is lovely-- the playfulness between them and how they've done everything possible with each other but it still comes back to the kiss. And the whole purely dialogic section at the end was win. And of course the first confession had to be a semi-drunken one-- it's so like them! I love your lines as well, such as "He’s a maniac tangled in his limbs."

[yamitoyoru]

Thank you!~ *hugs*

That's my favorite part of this fic! XD Makes my laugh every time XD.

Glad I managed to keep them IC!~

And yeah, one-liners. Sometimes it feels like I wrote the whole story only to be able to insert one single good line in it *sheepish smile*.