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King's Christmas Batch Part 1

Dec 25, 2008 21:47

Christmas Gift #1
Title: Devour
Prompt: Enraptured
Position on King’s List: Demon/Priest-in-training & Demon/Human whose soul he wants
Genre: Horror/Romance
Pairing: obviously King/Maru
Rating: R
Words: 892
Warnings: first time writing ‘bout demons and priests; grammar as it isn’t beated; AU;
Claimer: I own Maru and King owns us both.

( Devour )

maru, king/maru, king

Comments 2

Royal Notes 1-6 freakinmi January 13 2010, 11:31:25 UTC

(thought you might as well have to comments here too ( ... )

Royal Notes 7-12 freakinmi January 13 2010, 11:33:47 UTC

(apparently comments can't be more then 4300 letters)

7. Blue
*cough* eye-fetish *cough* xD But yeah, very short and precise. But I guess it’s better than saying yes due to my perverted tendencies xD

8. Play
*teethy smirk* This had me smiling in a pervy way all the way xD And the thought of Maru having to go on stage afterwards, listening to me do the line “So I better can eat you” ah, lovely <3. Again, one of my favorites of these. I’d love the play itself written out with dirty lines and hidden smirks that audience won’t get to see. But Maru in a skirt, wow, that I have to take advantage of xD Or perhaps borrow the costume. To rehearse the play, of course. =p

9. White
By itself, it doesn’t have the same impact as some of the really good ones here, but it certainly has room for a lot of toying and playing with its universe, making up stories in there could be a lot of fun. Uh, and I own a castle <3 ( ... )