Medicine for figaro! (betaed)

Jan 26, 2010 00:29

Reposting, ‘coz after the beta it’s a whole 300 words longer.

8th in the Cuddling Time series.

Title: Medicine
Pairing: Kiichigo;
Words: 2,918
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Rating: K+?
Beta: freakinmi 
Dedication: figaro_figaro , for no apparent reason, really. I call it the will of the fiction.
Warnings: angst, really long rant,
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of the ( Read more... )

fic, urahara kisuke, bleach, kiichigo, kurosaki ichigo

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gokuma January 17 2010, 01:18:01 UTC
Poor Ichi ;__;

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yamitoyoru January 17 2010, 01:19:33 UTC
yeah, seems like I'm making him go through a lot these days.

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gokuma January 17 2010, 01:23:16 UTC
I'm not really into this pairing (my OTP is Shunsui/Ukitake) but I liked this fic :) It reminds me a bit of Silverkytten's stories...

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yamitoyoru January 17 2010, 01:25:17 UTC
Thank you! ^^

Though I think I haven't read any of her stories.

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figaro_figaro January 17 2010, 14:41:30 UTC
To me?! :OOO Oh, damn. I'm touched. :) *pulls you into a big hug*

This was... sweet. And completely heartbreaking. This is how I like my UraIchi, Ichigo turning to Kisuke as a safe haven, somewhere where he can drop his mask and let raw emotions show.

I just love how Kisuke explained why sex wasn't a good idea, that Ichigo would soon connect the bad experiences he's had to the act and what that would do to their relationship. So very, very, very true.
I really like that Kisuke was s straight-forward on that topic too, really pounding it into Ichigo's head, and that Ichigo did accept it finally. And then break down. Oh dear... Poor, poor kid.
That's what I love about him, his complexity. He keeps a brave face on most of the time, but it's easy to tell he's terrified deep down. And like I said, I find it very plausible that Kisuke would be the one person he'd allow himself to be vulnerable with.

Great piece, baby! And thank you for the dedication! <3<3<3<3

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yamitoyoru January 17 2010, 14:56:39 UTC
I have this big grin splitting my face now, can't quite help it - I'm really, really happy you liked it! *hugs back* I'm glad it's to your taste! Especially since I'm in the mood for hurting Ichigo (though I think you've already noticed ^^;;).

I did feel heartbroken while writing this, having them go through all that nasty shit and living it through with them. Makes me think I'm a real masochist *laughs*.

And yeah, Urahara's rant. It honestly did take about 3 month for me to finish the fic, making random notes to it, having King help me a bit and push me to writing further. And I couldn't imagine Kisuke saying it any other way - I think of him as someone who always knows what and how to say something to get to somebody. Really admire that part of him. Or I'm just reading too much into him ^^;;.

But I do feel pleased with how the whole thing came out and that you enjoyed it. Couldn't wish form more. ^^

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figaro_figaro January 17 2010, 17:17:33 UTC
Haha, I know all about the need to hurt characters sometimes. ^o^ It can be delicious and heartbreaking at the same time.

Well you are a real masochist, aren't you?

Oh wow, three months? I don't think you're reading too much into him btw, or, if you are, I am too. XD He is a sly bastard, always knowing how to get to people, but yes, I do believe he has a heart of gold.

Yep, I enjoyed it very, very much! Glad to hear you're pleased with it, too! It's an awesome feeling. :D

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yamitoyoru January 17 2010, 18:18:27 UTC
I like to think of myself as a sadist - a cute kitten that likes to tease buckets of drool and blood out of people and make my characters go through hell. XD But yeah, I realy am a masochist XD.

Three or more. Schoolwork, a few other projects and the need to sleep sometimes got in my way XD.

It is a great feeling indeed! ^^ To know that I made ya a bit happy ^^.

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