RenIchi - Longing

[yamitoyoru]

Title: Longing (any ideas for a better one?)
Pairing: RenIchi
Genre: Romance
Rating: M?
Words: 417
Warning: mentions of sex
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of the characters.
AN: It was supposed to be longer, but I'm not good enough. The piece just beat me to a pulp and left gasping for more words and I simply gave up. I was wondering 'bout making

Comments

[zealot1138]

Poetic and lovely. WHY would you want to give up on RenIchi when it's so THIS?!?!
<333

[yamitoyoru]

Thanks! All the nice comments and feedback make me really happy that I put up a fight and wrote the drabble till the end. ^^

As to why I was thinking of giving up. Well, my muse didn't cooperate at all. It really was supposed to be something more, something of a sort of Ren's POV on Summer Rain. Well, the process of writing wasn't as enjoyable as it should be. That's why. I do hope it was a one time thing and that next time it will be easier and better.

[writerx75]

Mmmmm...I love how your very vivid descriptions of the action really brings the desire these two feel for each other to life. So delicious and sweet and hot. :D

[yamitoyoru]

Thank you ^^.

[babyluw]

I can't believe that I missed this. I miss alot, and it makes me sad.

This was so, like liquid. It just dripped right through, so smooth, so poetic and all the way just lovely. How they cling to each other, nearly desperate but still far from it.

[yamitoyoru]

Thank you very much ^^. I really like writing poetic stuff, allows to get more emotions through, imo.

[ganja_chan]

Omgomg that was hotttt... there was no graphic description, but that was even better without it - we had to imagine everything. It was like we were peeking into a dark room through a keyhole, or something. Anyway, it was very, very stimulating ;p and omg I could almost feel the hot breaths and all! gosh, I myself would like my (inexistent) sex to be at least half as hot .___.

*gives many many cookies!*

[yamitoyoru]

Mogę po naszemu? =P
Haha, podobno jestem dobra w opisywaniu seksu bez właściwie pisania o nim. W sumie lepiej dla mnie, bo graficznie pisać nie potrafię. Naprawdę cieszę się, że ten mały fic tak przypadł ludziom do gustu (chociaż boli, że inne moje twory choć lepsze to nie cieszą się popularnością bo nie dotyczą RenIchi, ech). Dzięki!

*noms cookies*

[ganja_chan]

Eeeeeeeeeeeej a-a-ale czemu ja nie skojarzylam, ze ty swoja?! :D:D

A taka zdolnosc jest mega, wielu osobom zamiast nie-graficznego opisu seksu wychodzi jakis kicz nad kicze ^^

[yamitoyoru]

Bo mało Polskiego w sieci używam? XD

Gdy zwęszę kicz przestaję czytać, ale wiem o co Ci chodzi. Ja daję cobie spokój, jeśli widzę, że to nad czym pracuję jest beznadziejne. Albo zmieniam to.