GC: Ravenous; Renji/Ichigo

[yamitoyoru]

Title: Ravenous

Pairing: Renji/Ichigo

Genre: Angst/Romance

Rating: R for Renji’s dirty mind;

Words: 874

Warning: AU, angst, unrequited love;

Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach or any of the characters.

A/N: Um, I’m not very satisfied with this. Even though it was on my mind for some time now it seems like all I can muster is angst and drama (

Comments

[miathemuffin]

Oh my goodness. That was absolutely /lovely/.

You have NOTHING to be disappointed about! It's so bittersweet! And I can never get enough of Renji's dirty mind, haha.

Good job ^__^.

[yamitoyoru]

I like it bittersweet. ^^ Still, I'm feeling rusty when it comes to writing Ren/Ichi fics (and fics whatsoever); had a little break from writing.

Thank you!

[writerx75]

Mmmmm...I really liked the delicious images you use here of Renji's dirty imaginings, and the way he's so honest with himself about the chances he thinks he has, and about how much he really values Ichigo, and the relationship between the two of them. Very well done piece.

[yamitoyoru]

Thank you *bows*. I tried my very best.

[yamitoyoru]

Angsty longing is the best, imo =P
Thank you!~

[spikykun]

Dude, this was great! Although I usually like my AUs focused on the universe, your fic was short enough to focus just on their relationship and get away with it (though I liked the touched of the AU very much! *can't imagine Ichigo rolling up his sleeves*).
It was very... painful, like I was right there with Renji, like I was carried off by feelings he couldn't act on. I like his self-control, too, most writers don't give him that much credit when it comes to how strong his character really is. The descriptions were extremely hot, too.
Well played! :D

[yamitoyoru]

*bows* Thank you very much, Spikysama!~
You liking the fic makes me feel a lot better about it. Especially the painful part; I really wanted that part to get through.
So yeah, I'm happy you liked it. ^^