Nature

[yamyam_kat]

Once upon a time, three lions played. Then a huge, loud, smelly, and speedy monster drove by. Three people came out

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Ah! This was brilliant. I loved the colorful sketch of the lions and a story with a message is always appreciated. Well done! Kudos. Good use of the prompt. Cheers:)

[murielle]

I'm so sorry that some of the lions died. A very important lesson in this story about not hurting wildlife, even unintentionally with our garbage. Wonderful story, and really good drawings, yamyam-kat!

[favoritebean]

Your story is so heartbreaking! Especially given the fate of the mama lion and her cub at the end. Having one of your characters die in a story must have been very sad to write.

I really liked how you took down the fourth wall to speak to the reader without softening the narrative. Sometimes, we humans need a not so gentle reminder that we create problems if we are careless.

Bravissima! I'm proud of you.

[bleodswean]

This is a sad story. But a good reminder that we need to care for the world and ALL of the animals who live in it.

[bewize]

This was so sad. I hate what happened to those poor lions.

Great story with a really good message.

I hope that people and lions can get along again.