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yanatya

My bubblefic entry

Jan 16, 2006 20:25

Title: The Bomb Drop
Author: Yana
Fandom: The West Wing
Pairing: Josh/Donna
Rating: NSFW-porn
Spoilers: S7
Disclaimer: Not mine. I make no material profit from this.
Acknowledgements: To christinekh, my irreplaceable beta who did multiple betas including a last-minute speed!beta because I suck. Whose comments both crack me up and convince me to make changes ( Read more... )

Comments 5

caz963 January 17 2006, 01:47:41 UTC

Fabulous! Haven't commented on your stuff before, but I've read it all and really enjoyed it! Hope the muse returns soon!

Muppet- barf...! I'm still laughing!!

yanatya January 20 2006, 05:05:42 UTC

Oh, good! :) I'm so glad you liked it.

_enharmonic January 17 2006, 06:38:52 UTC

Wow!

It was nothing like she'd imagined or expected. His kiss wasn't arrogant, it didn't dominate or assert control. It coaxed her, stroked her mouth, caressed her. A strong, slow burn, instead of a greedy flame.

Those were definitely my favourite lines.

Awesome job.

yanatya January 20 2006, 05:06:16 UTC

Thank you!! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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Re: Hey!! yanatya June 24 2006, 14:33:32 UTC

Thank you again! Very happy you enjoyed it.