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[yanatya]

Title: New Golden Age
Author: Yana
Rating: Adult
Spoilers: Through all S7, including teasers/speculation
Characters: J/D, Bram
Disclaimer: These characters aren't my invention. The story is, though.
Notes: For kiss_me_cassie, who wanted J/D/B with mention of an elevator and Bram's fangirls, in reparation for killing her buzz. Hopefully, this counts the same as

Comments

[skywaterblue]

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My brain just melted into a pile of goo from the hotness of that. OMG.

[yanatya]

Woo! ::scoops it up, hands it back:: So glad you enjoyed it!

[dianora2]

Haaaaaaaaaaaa I love this. LOVE.

Oddly, I think my favorite bit is this:
And then eventually, because she was Donna, after all, not some mystic houri, she'd get up to pee. And come back to bed, and snuggle like the Wisconsin farm girl he'd always known she was, and everything would be utterly right and completely normal. Naked, but normal. And then later, she'd pester him about something and steal his food and even that was amazing, because when she did it, she made him feel as though he were the only person in the world who could give her the things she was asking for.

That's just so them. Love it. Great to see you writing.

I think I need to write the J/D/B just to shut everybody up. ;P

[bbennett]

Agree absolutely with dia (who definitely needs to write her story already).

[yanatya]

So happy you liked it!!! (and yes, she does) :)

[kiss_me_cassie]

Yes, you really do. ::thwack:: Get to it!

[kiss_me_cassie]

She loves me! She really loves me! *g*

HOnestly, I loved all of this, but I think the things I loved most were the little bits of normalcy (Because she was Donna, she got up to pee), the knowing that they have of each other and their relationships to others, and how you have Donna just picking up the conversation later on like there was no break.

The fact that I like the hotness and the image of Donna watching him and Bram? Well, that ones a no brainer. hehe!

[yanatya]

Of course I do, sweetie! ::mwah:: And if it were in my power to give you hot sweaty J/D/B, then I would have done so. I'm glad you'll let this count.

See my comment above about them being back to normal. If they actually follow up with this, it'll actually look and sound like old-school J/D.

I'm so glad you liked! Thank you!!

[kathgrr]

OMG.... that's insanely hot. I'm melted in a little puddle on the floor. Who knew Donna could be so brilliant with words? Hm... you know that last line? Hm... thinking of doing a sequel?

[yanatya]

Hee! Thank you so much! No sequel plans at present, but I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yay!

[nursedianaklim]

Awesome. That was incredibly hot.

[yanatya]

Woo! Am so very happy you liked it! Thank you.