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Apprentice (xXxholic, Doumeki/Watanuki)

Feb 21, 2010 22:02

Title: Apprentice
Author: lanerose
Fandom/Pairing: xXxholic, Doumeki/Watanuki
Rating: PG
Warning: References to violence, language
Word Count: 1410
Prompt: Doumeki/Watanuki - hurt/comfort, set around whenever Watanuki takes over the shop, possible difficulties with a client who threatens Watanuki.
Author's Note: I swear this fic has *nothing* to do with ( Read more... )

Comments 6

aishuu February 22 2010, 05:11:47 UTC

Somehow this is very sad. I enjoyed reading it, but... it still strikes me as tragic.

lanerose February 22 2010, 06:18:03 UTC

No, I agree - it's a h/c fic that kinda fails at the c side of life. -_-;;; But I don't think they can really get a happy solution until Yuuko returns, if that makes sense?

aishuu February 22 2010, 06:32:32 UTC

This is clamp. I have no hopes for a happy ending.

lanerose February 22 2010, 07:04:19 UTC

*LOL* Point taken.

lady_ganesh February 23 2010, 00:55:22 UTC

I really, really liked this-- Doumeki's attempts to keep things normal, even when things so clearly aren't, Himawari's sadness; just excellent.

lanerose February 23 2010, 04:25:05 UTC

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it! ^_^