That was beautifully heartbreaking. The emotions are so vivid and real. "With the loss of one fake moment of perfect bliss, Sweden felt his whole world coming apart." You've managed beautifully phrase something I've experienced so many times. I just want to reach out and hold Sweden, scary face and all!
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that was reallly nice!
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thank you for writing an enjoyable story though.
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"With the loss of one fake moment of perfect bliss, Sweden felt his whole world coming apart."
You've managed beautifully phrase something I've experienced so many times. I just want to reach out and hold Sweden, scary face and all!
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