Crass

[yaoi_rox_me_sox]

Title: Crass
Characters/pairings: Austria, Netherlands, France; Netherlands/Austria
Rating: PG13-15-ish
Warnings: Clothing kink, dirty talk kink (albeit 1810 dirty talk), fade-to-black.
Summary: Written from a prompt by tiniestderp for Ned/Aus with a kink for fancy clothing and dirty talking.
“Well?” Austria blinked, realizing that Netherlands was

Comments

[nivell]

Great read! The Netherlands is so dashing!

[mochi_roll]

Beyond being an enigmatic delectable beef cake/man-candy, I never really cared that Netherlands had this awesome personality--until I read this fic. You opened my eyes to a new hot seme to look out for! I am aware of other Netherlands slash fic going around, but this by far is the most masterfully-written and subtle smut fic I've ever read (that is, in an area concerning the dynamic of Netherlands with other nations)

Good job, yaoi_rox_me_sox! :)
(Pardon my usage of the France pic, it's the only APH thing I got)

Loved it

[blue_ultimate]

I hardly see any Netherlands fics or fanart, but when I read this, it was just amazing. and Austria too. My 2 favorite characters. And Mister dutchman teasing France, it gets even better. I loved the dynamic of the two of them talking.

And I liked the construction of you story line in the 3 parts it gave the whole a smooth pacing. And I thank you for properly using paragraphs it made the read a comfortable.

all in all my only complaint was that Netherlands seemed in my eyes a little to teasing, but I guess that can pass since we really never saw hi when he is having fun in the Comics.

And he also smiled. allot. But that could me just being to critical.

Just trying to give some constructive criticism that all

I hope to read more of your fics, and hopefully more Netherlands and/or Austria.

Re: Loved it

[yaoi_rox_me_sox]

Goodness, thank you for you comment!

I understand your critique, and I must admit that if we were to base Ned purely on the comics without any additions to fill out his character, he would not have been the same. However, I simply tend to see him a someone that enjoys teasing to no end, as my own Dutch relatives are very much so that way. So I will admit that this is mostly my own personal working with his character coming to the surface. I understand that it won't be the same as everyone else's.

My excuse for why he doesn't smile much in the comic is that he's usually around Spain, and there's nothing to smile about for him there. But that's just more of my headcanon, so haha.

Thank you for the critique though, as well as your comments! I will keep them in mind.

[hamselbamsel]

LOVE LOVE LOVE ;D

Thank you for writing this :D
I love it :3

Really, thank you so much. It's beautiful!