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[yarden]

i have been riding my bike all around the city, composing poems in my head. i am afraid of poetry because i know nothing about it. i know words, sometimes, but nothing of form or meter. i would very much like to take a class on poetry

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[moltenscene]

i like this post. there is poetry in your words. (words in your poetry?)

[yarden]

i love you! your commentude makes my day. like, every time.

thanks.

[thelovesongs]

commentude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[yarden]

AMEN.

ps. i love your poems! you just get them out of your head into words! damn.

[calmandalert]

don't take a poetry class. unless maybe you read the prof's poetry beforehand and like it. i should have done the same thing with my fiction classes. these people are mostly charlatans. and you still write beautifully.

[yarden]

pretty big compliment, coming from you.

but i want to know about meter and form. i don't necessarily need to take a poetry writing course, but perhaps a poetry as literature class?

[anonymous]

Jesus christ! [deal bangers]Can you read me a bedtime story? Are you dutch by any chance??

Luke

[yarden]

not dutch, just from seattle, mystery luke.