gk fic

Mar 01, 2012 23:05

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Generation Kill; Brad/Ray; R
1,475 words

Hockey AU. With blowjobs.

Disclaimer: not mine.

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amoama March 2 2012, 09:04:50 UTC
Oh this was so happy making! <3

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yellowteddysuit March 4 2012, 20:08:33 UTC
I'm so glad! Thanks for reading.

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surexit March 2 2012, 13:02:58 UTC
♥♥♥

That was adorable.

Brad closes his mouth and keeps on skating, like he hadn’t even noticed Person there at all.
SURE BRAD. SURE.

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yellowteddysuit March 4 2012, 20:10:42 UTC
Brad loves Ray forever! ♥

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silviakundera March 2 2012, 17:48:18 UTC
ha, I never would have thought hockey au but now I totally see it.

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yellowteddysuit March 5 2012, 00:50:44 UTC
I just got into hockey and it just seemed so obvious. I'm surprised that no one else did it before.

Thanks for reading!

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dine March 2 2012, 18:14:22 UTC
it was so hard to decide - GK or hockey icon? you wouldn't believe how jazzed I was to see this, and how much fun I had reading it. I just wish it were miles longer, cause I'd love to see how things went forward from here

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yellowteddysuit March 5 2012, 01:07:48 UTC
I did give some thought about making it this epic thing, with Brad teasing Ray over more games and one day Brad finally realizes that Ray's flirting with him, and he doesn't expect it to be anything more than blowjobs, but it is and soon Brad beaks it off because he doesn't want to deal with a long-term relationship and he gets even more intense about bugging Ray on the ice and Ray is sad and finally fights Brad because he's so pissed at him, and then Brad is staring at Ray's blood and getting totally turned on but also is really scared that he might have hurt Ray too much, and he realizes that maybe they can work something out. But, um, I'm working on an epic hockey rps fic and kind of wanted to get this one out of the way.

Thanks for reading. :)

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yellowteddysuit March 5 2012, 13:02:03 UTC
*coughs* It's funny you should ask about that! I have been semi-stalking your journal the last few days because it's Hall/Eberle/Nugent-Hopkins soulbond fic. I was planning to bug you if I had any major questions, but so far I haven't needed to. But you were eventually going to get a thank you note, just because I'd feel weird not doing so. So thank you for the assistance you have already unwittingly provided. Sorry for stalking!

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_steelphoenix_ March 2 2012, 18:41:42 UTC
This just makes me go XD OH BOYS. Awesome fun!

“All that macho bullshit on the ice is like, your mating call. You’re not trying to draw penalties, you’re looking to get some.”
Ray is completely correct. :P

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yellowteddysuit March 5 2012, 01:09:31 UTC
Fact: Brad is snarkiest with Ray because he loves him the most.

Glad you liked this!

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