Stop Watch

[yeolcarp]

Title: Stop Watch
Rating: PG
Paring/Focus: Yeoljong (Sungyeol/Sungjong)
Words: 3000+
Genre: Romance, AU
Summary: A decade later and Sungyeol still remembers the boy who played with time and stole his heart.

Comments

[kurara_shikaze]

Wow...
that was PURE BEAUTY.
I could imagine every escene so well in my head it actually made me sad! No kidding! I really really lived this little story wholeheartedly.

I liked the part where Sungyeol is "mad" at Sungjong for being late and wants something to eat in return. It's SO CUTE that Sungjong actually uses his time control to go and make those (yummy) nutella sandwiches */////*

Absolutely beautiful.
You deserve a huge and fluffy something for it.
*__________*

[yeolcarp]

Thank you so much for the lovely comment ; ~ ; It really means a lot when someone enjoys something I worked hard on ^^

Nutella sandwiches are awesome щ(ﾟДﾟщ)

/awaits the huge and fluffy object O3O

[kurara_shikaze]

Q__Q you deserve more comments damnit...
Super yummy!

hehe you're so cute >0<

[yeolcarp]

lol more comments would be nice O3O but eh whatever xD
haha kawaii desu ne? (◕‿◕✿)

[irethsingollo]

Girl this was so amazingly wonderful and poetic ಥ⌣ಥ
You had me instantly dragged into the story, I loved the way it unfolded and I love the idea so much ♥

Their friendship, the way they become close and how Sungyeol falls for him ~ everything was so beautiful sobs.

And have I told you I love you for writing YeolJong already? If not then I SO LOVE YOU FOR THIS *hugs* Continue writing them, okay? ｡◕‿‿◕｡

[yeolcarp]

my otp is Yeoljong and right after that it's SungjongxInfinite lol I have plenty of things coming its way \o/ If only more people liked this ship xD

And d'waaaaaaa thanks for the lovely compliment, this is seriously my favorite thing I've written O3O The time stopping idea came from a Japanese drama called SPEC actually~

[irethsingollo]

Hehe Jongie is easy to ship with everyone~ MyungJong is doing things to me lately too, mostly thanks to Ranking King of course x"D
Aw I know, YeolJong should be more popular ;~; But we shall spread the love for this couple ~~!

You're welcome, I really loved it ^^ Oh sounds interesting~ might give it a try, I haven't watched anything Japanese in ages D: (I'm trying to ignore everything Japanese because the language mixes with Korean sfm since my abilities in both languages are kinda on the same level orz)

[yeolcarp]

oh god, ranking king, this amazing show thats dishing out the myungjong (屮ಥДಥ)屮 did you notice that when sungjong didn't choose yeol he looked upset? that could just be my imagination though~

i highly recommend the drama, it's quite quirky and interesting, mostly a mystery crime solving show

[engraved_16]

ASFKJHFSKL;
omg words cannot describe how amazing and beautifully written this was <3 the concept is amazing too!

i love the light, poetic and flowy quality you have to your writing. i find it so lovely~

omg the characterizations in here were superb! i love how sungjong is so timid, afraid of how people see him which is why he was so hesitant with sungyeol at the start yet they gradually fall in love being with each other while time is frozen.

Then there sungyeol who's just so lovingly devoted and falls for sungjong so hard and so fast. The part where he's reminiscing about sungjong whining about his muscled arm yet now he's withered away ;~; aww gosh my heart really went out to him.

the ending, is what puzzles me though >.<; i have a feeling that it's meaning is important and reveals something central about the whole fic but i just cant decipher it at all haha

[yeolcarp]

jdfkjd;afjdskl your super long comment makes me so happy *A* and it means a lot to me too since I've been trying to better charactize my characters instead of making them legos bricks O3O

omg beautiful Sungjong shipper, I ship SungjongxUniverse (屮ಥДಥ)屮 and what is this interaction you speak of? I'm not too update with all the things they do :d

[yeolcarp]

oh oops I forgot to mention the ending, sorry if it was confusing I have this thing where I love open endings. The last few sentences mean that no one really knows of Sungjong but they know Sungyeol who appears to vanish and reappear with a boy (Sungjong) meaning that at the end that was Sungjong who called his name and now they love each other and spend their time together in where time doesn't exist.

[engraved_16]

haha lego bricks xD i legit laughed at that in rl

[yeolcarp]

lol thank you for the compliment, don't worry yeoljong is fun for me to write. thank you for the other comments on my other stories too ^^

[zqueenable]

This is just amazing! I got goosebumps while reading it. You are a magician of words, no doubt. Hats off to you.
Can I please request more Myungjong?

[yeolcarp]

Thanks for the kind words lol and absolutely it's fine to request such a lovely otp, when I find time, be sure to look forward to Myungjong ^^