Comments | yeolcarp: Singing Rain [2/2]

yeolcarp

Singing Rain [2/2]

Aug 28, 2013 14:48

Title: Singing Rain
Rating: PG
Focus/Pairing: Daehyun/Youngjae
Words: 7000+
Summary: Youngjae's iPhone app shows no forecast of rain.

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pairing: daehyun/youngjae, !continuations, !fanfic, member: daehyun, group: b.a.p, member: youngjae

Comments 14

the_resolver August 31 2013, 18:34:37 UTC

Omg, I love this so much~ this is amazing, it's far far far better than I imagined anything following my super vague prompts could be. I'm in love with the characterization of Daehyun, he's just so cute in this. and kinda a little bit of a dork. I love how you juxtapose him to start off with with Youngjae but slowly Daehyun wears him down :)

I love the way the relationship progresses and I love the way that Daehyun is kinda leading it on but somehow not aware of the fact, and just enjoying himself and the company he's in. I love it all so much

Did I mention that I love it?

“Daehyun! You don’t even know where I live!” Youngjae shouts as he chases after the rambunctious maniac, trying to close the gap which separates them. It doesn't take long before they're next to each other again. It's not much of a race when one has to drag the other by the hand. I actually adore this image, I adore the idea and everything that creates this part of the story. I just asdfghjkl~~~

oh and the image of DaeJae wet is always welcome I'm so glad you ( ... )

yeolcarp September 1 2013, 09:06:58 UTC

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this, I was worried because after I posted it I realized that your ratings included R and up and I was like "shit. where can I add smut? oh fuck it. i hope this fluff is ok" woo, load off of my back lol. grumpy youngjae and dumb daehyun for life yo. It was definitely fun rewriting this whole thing and actually finishing it <3 though I feel like I chipped you out of something more special by not making a new fic :((

noolvidare September 1 2013, 08:54:17 UTC

wowww this (and your writing!) are so beautiful~ i really, really love your attention to detail, and your daehyun was the cutest in this!

and that hand-holding scene at the beach, when they swung their hands back and forth (and hit the ground because they were sitting) WAS SO CUTE. i flailed at the cuteness when i read that part XD

yeolcarp September 1 2013, 09:08:03 UTC

Thanks for the comment! Yes, love my Daehyun <3 dumb dae 4 life. and I made someone flail! \o/