Into the night

Apr 24, 2015 22:47

Title: Into the night
Pairing: kris/lay
Rating: NC-17
Length: 8,714 words
Summary: Yixing escorts the souls of people that make deals with demons out of this life. Yifan happens to be one of them.
Warnings: soul reaping!au. triggering subjects.[click to see]character death (does it count if his conscience keeps alive? lol), mentions of suicidal thoughts, death, Read more... )

fanxing, demon!au, nc-17

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hipployta April 25 2015, 05:28:00 UTC
Hmm...was Yixing always watching the humans he reaped for the feelings he found in Yifan? Perhaps a consciousness he knew before

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yeolis April 25 2015, 16:27:47 UTC
oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh that's interesting! i didn't think about this, but you could be right you know. maybe he met yifan in the past when he wasn't yifan yet. maybe not, because yifan acts completely different from all the others he's reaped before (perhaps because of his parents, he knows what happens to people who make deals). that's what's appealing, but i wouldn't discard what you say. damn it i should have thought about that, it's a much more interesting plot LOL thank you for reading!

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mutantbic April 25 2015, 05:30:28 UTC
/screaAMMMINNNNNNGGGGGG

ahem. so this fanxing has just pretty much made my day. I can't get enough of "the supernaturals that fall for humans" especially when business gets into pleasure haha. It's ok i know i'm utter trash in this regard and i don't care.

also Minseok as 'mr pricklepants' (i just can't)

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yeolis April 25 2015, 16:29:10 UTC
i'm also a sucker for supernaturals that fall for humans you have nO IDEA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
i had to sneak minseok somewhere tho lol
thank you for reading! ♥

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yeolis April 25 2015, 16:33:11 UTC
duuuude is it weird that i'm happy to read that you almost didn't like kris? to know that you felt something ;; it makes me rly happy LOL sorry, i'm just awkward like that. kris is a difficult character, i think. he's been through a lot, he's seen a lot. he's kinda like... dazed? not dazed, that's not the word i'm looking for. he accepted what's going to happen to him (even if he kinda breaks in the end).
anyhoo THANK YOU FOR READING ♥

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snow_meow April 25 2015, 15:34:48 UTC
Most interesting plot.

I'm not suprise that Kris behavior had Yixing fascinated with him.
I would be if I spend eons reaping humans and this human before me doesn't behave in anyway normally.

Yixing asked Kris about Mrs Wu.
Perhaps it was never about Kris finding a Mrs Wu compared to Yixing finding his other half to complete a life he never had.

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yeolis April 25 2015, 16:36:32 UTC
lol you're right. i would be fascinated as well if after years and years of meeting with the same situations, something didn't fit quite right.
WOW DUDE that's deep! but i agree with you. yixing couldn't have a life with the one he loved, right? he killed someone and fled, except he died tried to return to his beloved. so yeah, he never had a life :<
THANK YOU FOR READING! ♥

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krayaddict June 26 2015, 02:25:02 UTC
Waah!! HOW HAVE I NOT READ THIS BEFORE?! I'm not even that big on supernatural fics but you write them so well. The plot was soo...good! (I wish I had a better vocabulary) I really loved both their characters here. The story flowed at a nice pace and for a story about death if felt really light hearted and fun :) I'm happy Kris is staying with Yixing forever! :3 Also I'm always amazed by your sex scenes (not to sound too pervish but...) they'er amazingly descriptive and always different and I feel your character's vulnerabilities shows best at that time ^^ Another great story to add to my favs! (not surprised)

P.s- I love jealous yixing scaring away Yifan's last f**** haha!!

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yeolis June 28 2015, 02:38:47 UTC
ai ai ai thank you so much for complimenting my sex scenes lol i'm pretty insecure about them, so this means the world to me ;_;
i was afraid no one would read this one because it says 'character death', so i tried to make it very light I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT <3

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