When My Pupils Dilate

Apr 08, 2014 23:20


Title: When My Pupils Dilate
Author: yeolxing
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Chanyeol/Zitao
Length: 1300+
Summary: To Zitao it means so much more.
A/N: bc of the beautiful chantao moment; also i'm really bad at choosing titles( It’s without warning when Chanyel sticks the heart to Zitao’s cheek. )

r: pg13, f: exo, p: chanyeol/zitao

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eoryndal April 24 2014, 15:43:10 UTC
YOU WROTE ABOUT THAT MOMENT AND YOU WROTE SO BEAUTIFULLY ;;;A;;; <3 CAN I LOVE YOU FOREVER?!
This fic came at the perfect moment in my life, you made me feel SO MUCH and I really needed that. Thank you.
God, your characterization of Tao ughhh let me weep in a corner and Chanyeol too how do you words I am in awe ;~~~;

He’s so open and so accepting of new people into his life, but they barely ever reach his core

Zitao’s heartbeats are gentle flutters and Chanyeol’s footsteps are quick

They’re too dependent and they love too strongly - so strongly that it makes you feel guilty for not giving enough of yourself to them because they deserve to receive the kind of love they’re giving. Actually started crying for real at this point, but for that, too, I am thankful

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yeolxing April 27 2014, 17:24:57 UTC
DO YOU KNOW WHAT MADE ME CRY
YOUR COMMENT
honestly i never thought someone would comment on this fic and i'm just weeping in my sad little chantao corner right now because your comment is the most wonderful thing to have happened to me today you wonderful person you
zitao is probably my favorite person to write and i am so happy that you liked it i'm just i cannot express my feelings properly because chantao is very important to me i have at least 3 chantao fics started and i'm hoping i can finish them and just someone liking this is giving me the push needed to continue writing chantao (not that i would ever stop tbqh)
THANK YOU
YOU ARE A GEM

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