The Obscure

Oct 16, 2008 16:39

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lwdagreat October 16 2008, 20:15:22 UTC
This was absolutely delightful! John & Rodney = adorable. Kittens = adorable. John & Rodney as kittens = super adorable!

I thought you did an excellent job all around - everything from characterization to kitten-izing (I love that SGA fandom lets me mentally debate the proper word for cat transformation). The scene with Rodney and Torren was excellent. Your internal-Rodney voice always felt very true to me. All scenes with Zelenka or Ronon and Rodney were delightful as well. And John's obliviousness, panic and terror made me fill up with glee.

Well done! I'm glad you plan to keep writing SGA fic - I can't wait to read more from you. :)

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yesj October 16 2008, 20:29:24 UTC
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for this comment! I am all a-flutter *handflails* I am so pleased you liked the Torren scene! And Zelenka and Ronon! And eeee, thank you for saying I got Rodney right. And, and. *flaps* Eeeeee!

I am definitely working on more SGA fic, these boys are getting their hooks right into my heart. :)

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yesj October 17 2008, 20:08:55 UTC
I'm so glad you gave it a chance! Thank you so much, eeeeee!

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yesj October 17 2008, 22:32:06 UTC
That is very good to hear! And by "is very good to hear", I mean "makes me do a dorky dance in front of the laptop". *g*

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ozsaur October 16 2008, 21:23:43 UTC
That was exactly what I needed! You really brightened my day. :-)

What I love the most is that you included so many lovely scenes with secondary characters like Kanaan and Torren. And Zelenka was so awesome! I loved Ronon too!

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yesj October 17 2008, 20:18:09 UTC
Thank you! That is wonderful to hear :)

I'm so pleased you liked the secondary characters too! I pretty much adore everyone on Atlantis, especially Zelenka and Ronon (they're my favourites :D) so it's really great to hear you liked those bits.

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evilshelly October 16 2008, 21:24:45 UTC
“He speaks scientist cat, not idiot pilot cat.”

adorable! thank you so much for sharing. this just made my day.

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yesj October 17 2008, 20:19:06 UTC
*beams* Thank you so much! I'm very pleased it did.

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adafrog October 16 2008, 21:38:14 UTC
So very cool.

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yesj October 17 2008, 20:19:43 UTC
Thank you! :)

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