Children of the Stars (Nikaido/Senga, R)

[yeska_noka]

So this was written a year and a half ago, and it's awful. But I think I'm not one of those people who can keep around unfinished fic. It's never going to get finished, but I think part of the reason I'm not writing anymore is because there are these things just sitting here blocking my way. So I'm just going to try an experiment and put this out

Comments

[flailinginlove]

That was definitely different. Some parts were good, some parts did need more work. I can see why you were having trouble with it. I laughed at Ebi being stars even though I know you wrote this way before 5stars. (^__^)b

It's interesting to read other people's WiPs and to see how they organize their thoughts as they go. For some reason, I thought you tended to write more linearly. Or were you just jumping around a lot in this one because you were having issues with it?

I hope this experiment works for you and you can get your writing groove back. Sounds like you were writing some last night? I've been thinking about doing something similar because I have multiple things that I will probably never finish, particularly the Kisumai stuff. Spring cleaning time?

[yeska_noka]

Wow, I don't know why I never answered these comments. Oops.

I think ABCZ were making references at one point to Cassiopeia, so that's what I used for them. I enjoyed that they had a constellation reference to match Kisumai's.

I do tend to write linearly, which is why I couldn't finish this. It was too broken up into pieces and I couldn't put them together. I had different scenes and ideas, but nothing concrete.

I want to write again. I wish I could. So far I have three fics for this year, if we're counting this one. >_>

[ismera91]

Even though you say you think it's awful I actually really liked it. I love the world you have created :) the idea of having a one fated partner and being draw together like magnets is really lovely. :)

[yeska_noka]

Sorry I'm so late answering comments on this post. I don't know what happened. (Did I get notifications for these??)

But I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really liked the idea behind this, even if I couldn't manage to write it out properly.

[rin_aokuro]

I really love the main idea of the fic, and pretty much everything else as well. Of course I could see the incompleteness in it too but I didn't really mind; it was easy to understand and at least it feels like the most important things are in there.

The thought of them being connected to stars is awesome, and on top of that I'm awfully weak when it's about colors. Thinking about the kisumai colors shining all together makes me happy. ♥

(Btw I couldn't help smiling when, in the middle of reading this, I glanced up and saw my Big Dipper -shaped Kisumai penlight on the bookshelf and then the Za ABC ~5stars~ poster on the wall.)

It took me a moment to get the meaning behind the mention of the forgotten star and then when I finally realized what it's about I was all ";___;" just because.

I hope posting this fic helped you to overcome your writer's block. I've missed reading your fics! :'3 Thank you~ ♥

[yeska_noka]

I'm glad you commented, because I came to look at this page and realized I'd never responded to the other comments. D: FAILURE.

I really loved the idea of this fic and I wish I could have written it out properly. It was all so nice in my head, and I wanted to share it with everyone, but I just couldn't pull it together. :(

I love the constellations and colors, too. :D