After Dark (Kitayama/Totsuka, NC-17)

[yeska_noka]

Title: After Dark
Character/Pairing: Kitayama/Totsuka
Rating/Warnings: NC-17
Summary: Kitayama wants Totsuka to be with him, but he wants it to be as equals.
AN: Written for flailinginlove's birthday... last year. And I just finished it for her birthday this year. Still a few days late. Epic fail. It's set in my (shared) vampire universe, and almost directly

Comments

[flailinginlove]

YAY!!!!! *flails at you again* RAAACHEEELLLLLL. I've been waiting for this forever and it's finally here! I was totally going to give you crap about maybe finishing it for my birthday this year and then got too busy to do so but you did it anyway. *throws ♥ at you* And it's actually better a few days late this year since the last few days have been crazy. :D

I love this verse so much. So happy I got you to write more in it. ♥

I love Hasshi trying to stand up to Takki and Kitayama feeling the distance as much as Tottsu does and that Takki has gotten his new pets all trained up and Kitayama being a total idiot. Vampire senses fail. XD And Tottsu making him wait just a little longer.

I'm curious what you didn't like about it or did you manage to fix the parts you didn't like?

I really enjoyed this. Thank you so much!

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[yeska_noka]

I'm really glad you like it. I didn't manage to fix the parts I didn't like, it's more that I just cut them out. The porn wasn't quite there and I glossed a lot, and the whole thing just somehow didn't have the emotional impact I wanted it to have, at least for me. But I don't know if it's just because I spent forever reading and rereading and staring at it that my frustration overcame everything, or if it really isn't there. Either way, the whole thing isn't something I'm thrilled with, but it's done, and I'm relieved that people are enjoying it.

[mousapelli]

mm, this is still hot so I'm glad you finally posted it. Vampire Tottsu is best ever, and things aren't right when ebikisu aren't equal to each other.

Takki's little vampire pet projects, ahahahaha, I love the idea of that still. It's so close to reality pfft.

♥

[yeska_noka]

Equal is important.

[mbdancer8o8]

I flailed when I saw Rachel fic on my F-List~ :D
Almost forgot how much I love vampire/pet fic. I love how Hasshi stands up to Takki for Tottsu~ ♥

[yeska_noka]

:D

[kira_shadow]

I love this verse and I love aah so much about it ;A; being together as equals and Tottsu totally being in control and making Kitayama wait just a bit longer... and aalksdjasl

*incoherent*

so uh... ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[yeska_noka]

:)