fic: strangers and cakes; jenny/emma; pg

[yesssirrr]

Title: strangers and cakes
Author: yesssirrr
Characters/Pairings: Jenny Hartmann/Emma Muller
Rating:  PG
Length: ~2600
Spoiler: None; AU, future!fic; written in 2nd person POV
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters or people. No copyright infringement intended. 
Summary: Emma tries to bring someone cake as a peace offering, but someone else opens the door.

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Comments

[ptcruz]

Wow that was awesome! You can write some more, please. Maybe continue it? Really,really liked it. :)

[yesssirrr]

Thank you for reading! I'm not sure when I can write up another story, but I'd love to do more of them. I suppose we'll just have to see.

[yesssirrr]

No.

[yesssirrr]

Thanks, but no.

Also, how dare you use a crying Naomi gif at me like this is something that's okay?! How could you even do that?! We were special! But you ruined it or whatever.

Anyway, this one wasn't even the one I was originally writing, so there's still hope, maybe.

tl;dr

bitch, no.

[lazerbug2006]

Fantastic! Emma was Emma-ing all over the place~ PERFECT :)

[yesssirrr]

Haha I was really concerned about the characterization since I'd never written them before. I tried to get a proper feel on how they were.

I actually started writing this story from Jenny's point of view. But she has a little bit more semblance of control than Emma does, so I switched them around.

[hollie_1201]

This is amazing. I love the way how you've written the fic and the build up of emotions leading to Emma running away were spectacular. The ending was so fitting as well and I loved it. This is probably one of the best Jemma fics I have ever read.

- Team HeYa

[yesssirrr]

Haha well thanks for reading!

I'm glad that the tension build up was palpable and clear enough. That's a lofty statement, but I appreciate it all the same.

[yesssirrr]

Fresh? Sweet deal, thank you.

Well, I'm hoping for more ideas. Thanks for reading, friend!