Unfortunately, Redux

Dec 10, 2008 19:52

TITLE: Unfortunately, Redux ( Read more... )

r: pg13, &whore!verse

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shangrilove December 11 2008, 04:00:36 UTC
ALDKFJ;ADS!

FINALS!

But reading anyways.

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yey_yey December 11 2008, 04:06:11 UTC
That was practically instantaneous!
Are you stalking me?

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shangrilove December 11 2008, 04:26:03 UTC
Of course I'm stalking you. You're so... stalkable. I totally know where you sleep at night. (It was a good 8 min after you posted)

AKDLFJ;AD. MONEY TROUBLES. WE ALL SEEM TO BE HAVING THESE NOW DAYS. STUPID ECONOMY. THE YEN FALLING IN VALUE. SUB PRIME MORTGAGING. STUPID CUT ON INTEREST RATES. I'M TRYING TO SAVE MONEY HERE!

Oh Shige. You are so much fail. Even though the whole tuition thing wasn't your fault. And Ryo to the rescue! I bet he enjoyed that.

I am so glad you're still writing this. Cause your whore!verse will never get old. ♥

(psht, hope you get over writer's block soon)

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yey_yey December 11 2008, 06:18:19 UTC
I'm almost done with the semester, so soon, I've have lots of time to get over writer's block XD

Well, if it's you stalking me....

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psyches_muse December 11 2008, 04:25:19 UTC
ASDGLKNAFDGLFND;GLFNDKGLFDNA;FJDGNA;DFJKGNA;DFJGNA;DFJKGNAGF

ILU ;_;

I HAVE MISSED U SO MUCH IN THE FLOOD OF RECENT NISHIKATO FAIL.

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yey_yey December 11 2008, 06:25:36 UTC
Aha, I'm back. Sort of.
I've been working on this for the past few days in between finals :3

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psyches_muse December 13 2008, 05:57:45 UTC
okay. i think i can leave a proper comment now LOL

just random things that i noticed (i think i've read it like 4x now so i THINK i caught everything...haha)

most interesting Criminal Law courses, but is considered
Shige smiles, "Of course. I don't have class for another hour and a half."
restaurants in Shibuya, where each
Ryo is somehow able to weasel
unbuckling Shige's belt
But I know you're tired."

now that that's all done. i'd like to say that i think my favorite part of your fics are the little details that make it so REAL to me even though it's AU.

for example, this line "Shige ends up crashing early, on the couch, while Ryo watches Utaban and berates KAT-TUN for being stupid, even though they can't hear him."
that part about KAT-TUN you didn't have to add it, you could have just said Ryo watched a tv show. But little things like that really make iti love that it sorta came full circle again, with shige thinking about becoming a whore again, except this time he had to think about his relationship with ryo. i was like ( ... )

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yey_yey December 13 2008, 06:58:09 UTC
AAHHHHHH, WHY DO I FAIL SO HARD AT MY OWN LANGUAGE D:

But thank you nevertheless for pointing those mistake out. I'm definitely going to go back and fix those >_<

misticloud and i were not kidding when we said you were the gem of the nishikato ficdom
S;FDASDFAJS; ♥
*dies again*

Also, tonight, in the middle of dinner with my friends, I got an idea for a drabble, and I wanted to punch myself, because I keep coming up with new ideas, when I have the most giant writer's block ever with this other chapter I have half-written :|

Oh, and I love your icon :3

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catskilt December 11 2008, 04:37:05 UTC
I HAVE MISSED YOU. ;_;

You totally made my day with this and just to prove it further, I shall list down what I loved about this:-

- You always take real issues and make them deal with it, like tuition fees, and they always come through in a realistic manner. I love your mind.
- Shige contemplates being a whore again even though he knows how it might possibly destroy his relationship with Ryo.
- How understanding Ryo is which shows how badly he wants the relationship to work.
- Shige saying 'ok' while they're having hotpot... just. I don't know what to say about that. It's so good.
- Shige's mum being understanding...so many, many writers completely disregard his relationship with his parents but you got it down perfectly.
- Shige telling Ryo he'll move in and...gwah. I might have squeed a little.
- EVERYTHING FOLLOWING THAT.

I will never ever get tired of your writing so don't ever stop <3

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yey_yey December 11 2008, 06:28:19 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Your little outline of everything you liked in the chapter made me ridiculously happy for some reason.
HUGS, ILU.

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tacchon December 11 2008, 04:38:01 UTC
That was so cute! ♥ They are adorable.

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yey_yey December 11 2008, 06:28:50 UTC
Thanks! ♥

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raviolikenshin December 11 2008, 04:40:11 UTC
Seriously

I love your shige so much~ I also love that he was willing to whore himself rather than beg ryo ^^

What a fantastical chapter~

And the last scene made me laugh a little.

I hope your writers block fades away soon, because I love the whore!verse so much. Its like an integral part of my life XD

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yey_yey December 11 2008, 06:29:32 UTC
I'm almost done with finals, so once that's out of the way, I'll have a lot of time to sit down and find a good way to finish the other chapter that I have on my desktop :3

Thank you!!

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